My BF's Work Bully - Chapter 15 (EXTRA)
Added 2025-03-12 17:00:06 +0000 UTCFinally finished the chapter! Took me longer than I expected😅
Chapter 15: https://imgchest.com/p/agyv2k5jk48
I hope you like it
(Chapter 5 of My Son's Girlfriend will be delayed until tomorrow)
Comments
I enjoy your writing style so I would rather you pursue what motivates you. Keeping a schedule can be difficult enough without trying to appease others. But if you want to expand Vina's corruption and vocalization of it, I am all for it. Just keep up the good work.
Sarcasmic
2025-03-14 18:28:31 +0000 UTCYeah I get all that tbf, I’m nitpicking at this point honestly - it was still a great story and I understand your reasons for the narrative choices. Can’t wait for the rest of your new story!
Falcon
2025-03-14 12:06:45 +0000 UTCI get what you mean, and I actually imagined those scenarios in my head as well… but then a problem came up: I made Vina too loyal. Her personality ended up being so strong that I just couldn’t see her doing something with Jovan, going home, and then giving in to him and her own impulses again. If she were a different kind of girl, I might have gone that way. As manipulative as Jovan is, I just couldn’t see her thinking, “Okay, he made me feel things I’ve never felt before, let’s go betray Tommy again". So I took the easy way out by making her corrupted right away (And there’s no reason for a conversation between Jovan and Vina in this state) But this is just my perspective
HBO AMC
2025-03-14 01:03:20 +0000 UTCI would’ve loved this so much more without Jovan taking over the conversation with Tommy. Building Vina up to cheat was so so good and then just bam it’s like I ‘skipped too far ahead in the video’ if you get my meaning. Could’ve been better with us finding out about her fully giving in to him through an interaction with Jovan bragging to Vina about what a slut she was for him and how he knew she was, blah blah and him sharing videos he took to remind her of the filthy things he got her to do. Then maybe some of the Jovan and Tommy stuff after all that. All that stuff said, I did enjoy this overall and I’m loving the new story - just some thoughts, keep up the good work.
Falcon
2025-03-14 00:16:54 +0000 UTCAs I mentioned in the comment below, it depends on what you want. Theoretically, I could keep expanding Vina's extras indefinitely. An example could be a sequel showing what Steve does on this day (for example, Vina's first anal?), and much more... For now, the ones that are certain are the ones I've said (also because I'm way behind schedule😅)
HBO AMC
2025-03-13 00:30:15 +0000 UTCI really enjoy the further perversion of Vina. I would love to get her side of things, maybe get her on the torturing end of things. Are we done with this story completely after the cuck alt ending?
Sarcasmic
2025-03-12 23:58:33 +0000 UTCIt's working now, Excellent!
Rico
2025-03-12 23:21:49 +0000 UTCIs it still not working for you? I tested on multiple devices, and it’s working fine on my end
HBO AMC
2025-03-12 23:15:02 +0000 UTCFor now, the only interaction between Vina and Timmy will be available in the alternate "Cuck" ending (coming next week for premium tiers). As for extra chapters, the possibilities are endless, but I’m a bit scared about what Vina might say in her current state of mind😅😅😅 If you guys enjoy these extra chapters and want to see the interaction between Vina and Tommy, let me know (for example, by liking your comment, or maybe I could set up a poll in the future)
HBO AMC
2025-03-12 23:13:05 +0000 UTCAny plans to have bonus chapters with interactions between Vina and Timmy?
Dude
2025-03-12 22:55:28 +0000 UTCvideo isnt working i think
Rico
2025-03-12 18:56:52 +0000 UTC
