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My BF's Work Bully (Chapter 11)

Vina is confident, loyal, and ready to stand up for Tommy. But when Jovan steps into their lives, her strength will be pushed to its limits. A dangerous game of manipulation and temptation begins.

Chapter 11: https://imgchest.com/p/qe4gej3qj7j

Let me know if you liked this chapter😊

(At the end of the last chapter, I wrote that the title of the next chapter was Sweet Surrender, but that will actually be the title of the next one)

My BF's Work Bully (Chapter 11)

Comments

is any one else having trouble seeing the video?

Rygwyn315

I fully agree with you, but just personal opinion. Still very curious where this is going :)

John

Thank you for the advice🙏

HBO AMC

Chapter 12 will be out on Monday I know, it’s cruel to stop at that moment, but it’ll be worth the wait. On Sunday, I’ll post the full schedule for next week

HBO AMC

When is part 12 coming out?

Matt

My personal recommendation for future stories is a progression from sexy/lingerie to nude to then either sex toys or sexual acts. I feel like nudes are a better middle ground as there’s still some sense of innocence before fully committing. But that’s just IMO love everything so far! Keep it up

Omega6464

Looking forward to see where your taking this! :)

John

I completely understand your point! In my original plan for the story, there were 2-3 chapters with sex toys before this scene. However, given how the previous chapter ended and not wanting to frustrate you readers any further, I decided to deliver it right away. I think the contrast still makes it exciting... Up until that moment, Vina was still "innocent" (which wouldn’t have been the case with the sex toy chapters). That said, I really appreciate your feedback. I love discussing these details and hearing different perspectives😊

HBO AMC

Still the best story I've read, but almost wish she had resisted more. Big leap from sending lingerie pics to a bj. Still, awesome work!

John


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