The barefoot blacksmith- scratch and screams
Added 2025-02-01 13:20:28 +0000 UTCShould I add some stuff to this "silent" comic? Let me know if you have any suggestions
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A distinctive difference in the dialog style from your previous art compared to current is now, there's a lot more senseless babbling. In the mini series you had about the space race Ticklee's, there was a meaning behind it: it was their language and it was always something along the lines of asking for more tickles. Okay, great! Sounds good, makes sense in world, adds some sense to the senseless. Thumbs up all around. Outside of that, for me personally, it all but completely takes me out of the scene. When there's no intelligible dialog at all I can just look at the panel, think, "She's laughing. " And move on. It would be one thing if this was perhaps a "level" of ticklishness that had to be reached? Like the final stage of a ticklr torture session is "unintelligible babbling." Because when every tickle scene is the same, with that same goofy, spastic face, and the same nonsensical babbling giggle-talk, they loose their luster, to put it kindly. Judging from your original pieces I understand English isn't your primary tongue, and one can assume you made this creative decision as a way to get around having to formulate dialog in a language most of your audience understands fluently and perhaps you don't. I would like to offer my services, free of charge, as translator/dialog consultant. This isn't me trying to get money out of a starving artist, again I do not want compensation, I want to be able to go through your work and "get off" like I used to, to be blunt.
Charles Guy
2025-02-07 04:23:25 +0000 UTCCan we update this previous post on patreon about The barefoot blacksmith?
超君 怪盗
2025-02-04 15:36:54 +0000 UTCI love these comics of yours and wish you would post all of your stuff from DeviantArt here too. It’s such a great platform to help artists out monetary wise.
Undead Writer
2025-02-01 17:52:46 +0000 UTCMaybe her begging for more? Love it when they absolutely love being tickled even when they can’t take it
Undead Writer
2025-02-01 17:10:42 +0000 UTC
