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Jun23 sketches

Busy month for me overall, in real life. But I'm still excited to draw.


As you can see from the cover image of this post, I've got some attention on Lize again, specifically on her human form. I couldn't find a general project idea for Yzuthl that I was satisfied with, and I'm also dissatisfied with some aspects of Lize's human design. So I decided to merge some aspects of Yzuthl's design into Lize's (with plans to draw her in full illustrations, instead of animations), and overall give it a stronger theme. I'm pretty satisfied with the result, though I might still make some minor tweaks here and there. I don't think this reference sheet will be a "finished" work in the sense of making it clean and precise and publishing it, but I'll keep it for private reference.

- I got rid of the hood and long cloak and long shirt, because I know I am going to suffer a lot with not knowing how to 1) draw long flowing cloth with lots of folds; 2) make her look nice (especially up close) with merely large patches of single-color cloth (either she's just a sea of black cloth that takes certain lighting to see the subtle folds of, or made of a patchwork of different colors); and 3) visually communicate her pose (and her sexy body in general) from underneath a cloak. (I do lose that idea of the wind blowing her shirt/skirt up, but it's an acceptable sacrifice.) With that, I'm moving fully away from the "hooded mysterious stranger" theme, and into the "dark witch/sorceress/priestess" theme, more befitting of her status as a god/avatar. In-universe, her human form is simply "plausible deniability" that she's human (though still otherworldly), as opposed to a full disguise and suppression of her presence (which was a conflicting goal I had before). If and when it's needed story-wise, I'll just make any character stupidly presume that she's a normal human.

By the way, all those red spots on her body (including her eyes) and clothes are not gems/glass beads; they're more slime. You can stick your finger (or another body part ;) ) in them.

- The main goal for this design is to make it visually easy for her to transition between her human form and her apostle/slimegod form. So it's mostly black, tight-fitting clothing that resembles her slimegod form. I really want to keep those black stockings. Unfortunately, the revealing clothes seem to make her look more like a frontline acrobat (even a bit punk-ish with the spiky shapes and platform shoes) instead of royalty/divinity.

- The secondary goal is to keep her sexy and have as many ways for her to deploy her slime powers as possible. Slime tentacles from her mouth, her sleeves, under her skirt, her back, her hair, even her ankles maybe. She can also liquefy any part of her body or clothes (and make them firm and sticky), for example her palms, or soles, or armpits, or belly... ;)

- I'm also testing out an idea with her god form's eyes. Hopefully it's not too off-putting, but then it's my OC and I can do what I want. :P I think the multi-irises give her a more inhuman, supernatural feel, and particularly bring out the aspect that the gods that she embodies are many, which reminds us of why she uses "We" and "Us" to refer to herself.

- I'm not 100% committed to the hairstyle either, but I similarly think it works for now. Sorry to see those side bangs go because that was one of her more unique features among my characters, but I often found difficulty in drawing them and making them look nice.

- I also got rid of the womb crest because I didn't like the design, and it's complicated to design a new one and place it.


Based on her appearance, I've also tried to solidify her personality a bit more. A lot of it is probably better shown than merely described. As a god, she gives off a mystic air, knowing the unknowable. She is good at interacting only with the people she wants to, whenever and however she wants to. She doesn't talk more than necessary and avoids unwanted attention in public (letting her follower(s) do the talking for her, if any), and only opens up when she is with her followers, or is attacking a new victim. Her hidden personality is playful and mischievous (and of course lustful).

She has general goals of expanding her influence (as a god) in certain ways, usually by converting new victims, but she cares more about the quality of the victims (abilities, affinity, loyalty etc.) instead of merely having numbers. At some point she might even stop expanding and just enjoy what she already has. She spends her time converting new victims, making administrative decisions for the cult, or just cultivating their essence.

She has several approaches to her victims, depending on the scenario. She likes to roleplay as an evil monster on a first encounter, making her victim helpless (via hypnosis/paralysis, slime restraint, or perhaps the victim is already in a closed and preferably dark place) and teasing them to build up anticipation as she gets into position. Alternatively, when she feels like it, she might seduce them to willingly come to her instead, and even let them take the lead, in a rare show of her sweet side. Just like her slime, her voice is soft and enticing, and feels as though it's creeping directly into your brain as she describes how good it feels / would feel. During sex, she always focuses on her victim's pleasure, and might become more passionate and immersed. While she likes to make things freaky, she never does anything cruel/sadistic. (It seems to lower the quality of the essence extracted.)

After sex, she retains mental control over her victim, and exercises it proportionately to how much they've opened up to her. Her victim might fully accept her, and for high affinity she might even grant her victim new powers. Or her victim might need a few more sessions to accept her, and she will suppress their conscious memory of her in the meantime. Or if the victim is completely antagonistic (as might happen when the cult is fighting their enemies), she might turn them into a zombie slave.


More sketches (still based on the old design; I might keep the old design in some existing sketches, and update it in others):




Finally, I have a random fanart planned. Just that the main problem is that I don't like how the float (and her arm) looks, so I might leave this one for a long while until I get my eyes trained in perspective more.


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Comments

Yeah, she can. I don't plan on exploiting it though. Thank you!

shjxHR

More Lize, love it. Interesting redesign you gave her, can clearly see the aspects from the previous design and Yzuthl flowing in there. Being a slime girl, she could in theory switch between any of those designs aynway, no? Just in case you felt like drawing the previous ones or, well, finishing some of the sketches of previous deisngs even. Keep it up, love her designs.

About the clothes, instead of just quoting all the time, you can just write it in the image or explicitly tell somewhere, if you don't mind. Otherwise, it's fine anyway, just a suggestion.

brunoais

Fair enough and good points 🙂. I didn't think of her being not be part of the body and the body being just a manifestation. As for the other things you answer. Makes sense. I guess I've been working too much on storytelling that I forget about these things and forget that things can be more fantasy and still be well entertaining (ups). I'm eager to see and read what you come up with 😍. Have fun m8!

brunoais

While I said she can change mass and split, they seem to be more tactical abilities than strategic for whatever reason. Maybe she can't maintain that state for too long, or maybe she simply doesn't want to / doesn't see the need to. Who knows. As for some other minor points, I'll just reiterate... she has a hive mind (the gods), even when in a single body.

shjxHR

Her post-essence total mind control tends to only be exercised if someone is going to oppose her. She mostly leaves people to their regular lives. She also does not target that many people to begin with (usually going for previous victims / her cult instead). So for example she can't control a random platoon of soldiers from the capital who was sent to attack her. She will probably play with any singular antagonist in whatever way she wants to. She's not insecure to the extent that she must immediately absorb and mind control anyone who stands in her way. People's authentic actions and reactions are part of the fun.

shjxHR

Yes, her clothes are part of her body. I think it's cumbersome to keep using quotes though. Before she collects essence, by "at a distance" I meant a short range. Maybe she will also have some influence at long range (1 km), but it will be extremely weak and will have to build up over hours or even days and weeks before people notice that there is something unnatural going on. Her pre-essence amnesia is also limited to erasing recent memories, specifically the memories involving her current encounter.

shjxHR

Also, she has some limitations, but I think it's nicer to leave them ambiguous. A lot of it simply has to do with her personality and motivations, i.e. it's not in her nature or interest to do certain things. Additionally, physically, she is a manifestation and not the gods themselves, so in a sense the gods' powers are limited by the "bandwidth". [It's possible that her powers are based on her victim's psychological state.] There are also other parts of the background lore/setting that I haven't revealed yet. And I plan to keep them to myself until I can express them impactfully.

shjxHR

I want to mention that Lize is not meant to be a "game-balanced" character, because she embodies gods. She can't be fought, in the same way that darkness or Cthulhu can't be fought. She has a lot of powers but may not always use them all the time. One-on-one, she is meant to completely dominate whoever her opponent is physically, psychologically and sexually. Meta-wise, she is designed for sexual fantasy, not for any compelling storytelling. Her powers aren't meant to be analyzed and made sense of (even though I do it myself, but that is for myself). They are meant to keep things interesting, fascinating, unpredictable, and titillating.

shjxHR

Great sketches once again! Thank you!

brunoais

Fanart: Oh! I know exactly what's wrong but I have no idea how to show it.... Kinda frustrating 🤷. The float needs to be a little bit rotatedclockwise and her arm needs to go forward a little more (in the 2D plane, it needs to shorten a bit and move down a little bit). Additionally, the float needs to have a dent where her butt is, similar how her arm dents it. Good luck. I hope that helps

brunoais

Split: I think it would be more interesting if Lyze cannot fully split but can make copies of herself which have to stay connected to be in sync, even if by a thin connection. If the connection is cut, one of the "we" goes to that body but it never tries to run away or be free. Once done with whatever, it just wants to be back to the hive (merge to the main body). I think this would make it interesting and also could be used to play a bit with alternate personalities which collectively make Lyze by having a thin connection severed through physical action (E.g. a sword or an arrow cutting the connection) Eyes: I like it! Not too offputting. They are well drawn. I really like all the rest of her! Awesome work!

brunoais

Oh! and absorbing increases control intensity but not distance. What do you think 🤔? In other words, if someone's affinity to Lyze gets high or more, she can control from anywhere. However, if someone is a strong antagonist, no matter how much essence is provided, she can never control that person beyond a few meters.

brunoais

About Lyze: "Clothes": I think it's better if you go straight up with "those are not clothes, they are just part of her body", so you mention clothes as "clothes" (quoted). They are just part of her body she changes color to resemble clothes. As for mixing with other people, I'd have 3 levels of clothed for the front. It can even look slightly uncanny because it's just her concept of how clothes are supposed to look like (for blending in) I like the "they are not gems". It's all part of her. mind control: I'd tune down slightly. I'd go with how strongly she can control is relative to how close she is, how much attention she's giving and loyalty. I'd go with: She can't control antagonists unless she's very close. As for memory control I'd make it so she can't control memories but she can mind control so the person cannot recall them. It's about making limits that gives some (futile) ability for others to retaliate in some way. She'd still be invulnerable to anything physical.

brunoais

I may already be a victim of Lize's charm! <3

Jike


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