Hot Dog King - brutalmoose

It's an interesting shift from your scripted style but I think the flow of the video suffered a bit. I felt like the transitions from live action to gameplay felt a bit stunted by the dialogue. Still a great video though =]

Hey, I appreciate it the feedback! It's funny reading all of the comments regarding how I sound in this video, because I feel like it's the most natural sounding thing I've put out, Originals wise. Guess "natural Ian" just isn't quite fit for YouTube - I'll probably just leave him over on Twitch.

brutalmoose

The special thanks credits appear on the first video of the month after the pledge has been processed. So, if you check the first video of the month (Math Blaster, for November), you'll find them.

brutalmoose

You may sound like a robot when you use a script, but you sound more like a drunken person in this video, and you are much less funny in it than usual. And now that I think about it, have you stopped putting Special Thanks credits at the end of your videos? I mean, I don't pledge enough money to get the $20 reward, but it's kinda rude to those who do.

Jdtendo Montcuq

I gotta be honest; you sounded really bored throughout this. I know you said you were concerned about sounding robotic by using a script, but not sounding confident is arguably worse than sounding robotic. But really, this is to be expected. Everybody sounds uncertain when they first start improvising. Improv's a bitch; or rather, it's a skill that needs to be practiced, just like anything else. Your scripted stuff shows you have the ability to be great at it, so your off-script stuff should only continue to improve as you keep working at it. It'll get better as you start to emulate emotions when you're not feeling them and talking with a sense of familiarity, as if to a group of friends rather than an audience. ...Can't really give good advice as to how to achieve that, though, as I'm not any good at improv, either. Still, keep at it, because you're good enough to get better at it. And even if it takes a little while to get to that point, I'll stick with you if you wanna keep going in this direction.

RainbowCat