Cyberpunk - CH.3
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With love,
Mr.SweetCuckhold
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Cuantos capΓtulos conformarΓan la serie?
Rex Mundi
2025-06-23 15:39:44 +0000 UTCThank you so much I appreciate ππ
MrSweetCuckhold
2025-06-15 22:47:38 +0000 UTCThe third part of Cyberpunk Street Corruption turned out to be quite intense and with only one immediately readable and predictable move - an ambush. The author immediately lets us see that corruption is already affecting Luna - she is tougher, more calculating and .... bitchy in conversation with Lucas and, on the contrary, more relaxed in sex and Lucas ... seems to like it. We must give the guy his due - he does not lose his head and clearly realizes that Luna is hiding something. The call from the head of the brothel and the subsequent ambush are very predictable. Luna is put in prison, where she is visited by a familiar student from Arasaka School, whose father turns out to be the owner of the prison. He offers her an obvious choice - sex with him and freedom, Luna sends him to fuck himself. The next segment simultaneously shows both the strength and weakness of Luna - her pride costs her 16 days in prison, at the same time this is a manifestation of a very strong will - excellent work with the psychology and character of the heroine. Luna steps over her pride and does what was wanted from her and after the act, says that next time he may not live to the end because of how he speaks and to whom he speaks. Here another possible key feature of the heroine's character stands out (which the author will hopefully develop and play up) - no reflection, pure, cold and even pragmatic awareness that this needs to be done. The ending is quite unexpected, even sudden - it reveals a new side to the heroine's character - she should not be treated like that - if the brothel owner bent our heroine over, then now she made him an extra bullet hole in the head. Maintained within the framework of the setting. (Although most likely the gunshot wound is not fatal, but if so... then even cooler!) An excellent chapter with one readable move and a coolly realized revelation of the heroine's character! Good luck and creative inspiration to the author!
Antony Yry
2025-06-15 20:19:34 +0000 UTC
