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Dialogue corrections: "Wtih" needs to be spelled to "with" and the word "and" between "try" and "talk" has to be changed to "to" so as to indicate a directive effort by Sea Salt towards Kyle *to* talk not "and" talk. This has been another English lesson from Professor Grammar. Cue the hate comments in 3... 2...