Quick! Is This Line Too Much?
Added 2019-06-14 01:21:42 +0000 UTCFriday's episode will feature this... but is this final line by Moondancer too much? Is it not needed? I know this is hard with no context or knowing what the punchline is... but what do you think going in completely blind?
Moondancer - "Don't touch me . . . I'm dangerously charged."
"Okay, you can touch me..."
Comments
looks fine. Twi in response: "okay let me get some rubber gloves so i don't shock myself"
kallenin
2019-06-14 04:06:57 +0000 UTCDangerously charged with British forces, I see. (I also don't think the line was "too much" without context.)
ZZ
2019-06-14 02:54:29 +0000 UTCIt seems like ponies are mostly quite touchy-feely anyway!
Andrew Pam
2019-06-14 01:39:27 +0000 UTCThank you. 2 for two! I think it's sticking!
2019-06-14 01:38:22 +0000 UTCSeems OK to me
Andrew Pam
2019-06-14 01:37:11 +0000 UTCThanks. Moondancer has always been pretty strange and vague in her tastes. :)
2019-06-14 01:35:51 +0000 UTCIt's a bit confusing without context, but it doesn't seem "too much"
Stellarator
2019-06-14 01:33:12 +0000 UTC
