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CH692 Rook's Perspective

A brief flash of disorientation and Rook didn’t know where he was.

One moment he was walking to another boring meeting when he got what felt like a bit of luck. He wasn’t used to being so disrespected and seeing the brat alone without the princess around to save him felt like the perfect way to kill some stress and finally get a chance to turn the girl to a better option. He would teleport behind him and then teleport the guy farther into the deeps, with the water hopefully serving the goal of getting him out of his way and failing that, letting the currents do it for him.

It was what he’d intended at least, but what he got was the nearly instantaneous sight of the other man’s arm warping backwards, pressing something into him and leaving him somewhere new and unfamiliar.

Of course, it would have been utterly impossible to call wherever he’d ended up a normal location when he was inside what by all accounts looked like an endless black void, the only things it held being him, a small light, and a sheet of paper.

Both things he instantly ignored in favour of trying to get away. He didn’t know what sort of trap he’d fallen into but he wasn’t a space mage for nothing, it was the skill he trained in the most to ensure he’d always be able to escape a hint of trouble if need be and he instantly put it to the test as he reached out with his mana, trying to feel beyond the confines of his strange prison but coming back with more than nothing.

Not just an unseen wall and not an endless void either, as he stretched out his mana he felt it coming back at him, destroying his sense of scale and giving him no way to judge the size of his confines.

Impossible.

It didn’t make sense which meant there was some trick to it, he just needed to find it. There was no such thing as a room without end and even if he was being suspended in the air he could still propel himself with his power, moving out for what could only have been a few feet before his perspective changed, bringing him back to face the light and the letter once more.

“I’m being teleported,” He finally said, feeling like he’d gotten the trick of it and only growing in his rage for that fact. “That brat thinks he can best me, a ninth-leveled space mage, with some cheap enchantment of my magic! THAT ASSHOLE! How dare he, when I get out of here…”

His mutterings went on while he went, straining space itself in every way he could think to and failing again and again, still not understanding its construction, nor how it was keeping him in place, endlessly looping him back again.

He didn’t feel any magic in the act but knew that had to come down to a matter of skill in the enchantment, even if he didn’t want to acknowledge it, but that skill only went so far. He may not have known much but he knew that an enchanter needed to hold the magic they were aiming to enchant with and if the brat had held space magic at a high level he wouldn’t have needed to be saved each time Rook attacked him. He was obviously on the low end no matter how much he was able to compensate it by having his enchanting awakened which meant it couldn’t actually be that powerful, only being a matter of breaking his way out.

That meant overpowering it and as much as he didn’t want to, Rook sat after that, letting his mana regenerate all he could before striking out with a far grander attack, trying to break beyond space itself and still coming up empty, leaving him on the edge of mana exhaustion with nothing to show for it.

Not wanting to pass out, feeling like it would be playing entirely into the other’s hands, he finally gave in and did the only thing he could do, reaching out to grab the letter, reading it by the small light for whatever clues it might contain.

My dear Rook, 

If you’re reading this, that means you haven’t given up. You couldn’t accept that you’ve been rejected… Well, that you never had a chance with Thera to begin with, and you continued to refuse to act your age, so as the more responsible one between the two of us, I’ve made the difficult choice to place you in a time-out for a while.

How long is a while I hear you asking as you read this? Well, it’s hard to teach an old dog new tricks and you happen to be a very, very old dog so I’ve decided that a week of nothing to do but float and reflect would be for the best. As someone who’s been trapped before as well, I’d say to hold onto this letter no matter how much you want to tear it up, eventually, this is going to be the only bit of stimulus you’re going to have so you better appreciate it.

Now, if you make the very inadvisable decision to ignore this by the time you get out, to attack me and make an attempt on my life or to harass Thera some more then you will live to regret it for one simple reason. I know what you fear.

It doesn’t help that you made it obvious. With space magic being the only skill you have above the seventh level despite having had centuries to grow into something that could actually help the world given what you knew had to be coming, tied into the fact that you stepped back when Thera threatened to hit you into space, you fear the only thing it makes sense for an immortal to fear. Being stranded.

So this is what’s going to happen. I could threaten to put you in something like this permanently but that would honestly be too boring. What I am going to threaten you with is this. Not only if you do the things I’ve already said, if I die in any way other than old age, I will be calling in a favour from the great space spirit. If you know anything about great spirits, you know how powerful they are so you know your own pathetically low magic won’t stack up.

What I will be asking him to do in the event of my demise is simple as well. All he’s going to do is teleport you into the heart of a star.

Now, I’m going to give you the benefit of the doubt that you at least know a thing or two about stars. One being the size. Given you can only teleport a few hundred meters that you can see while this world’s sun makes the planet look like a pebble in comparison, you should be able to understand you’re never getting out of it. Trapped forever in an elemental forge, unable to escape.

I must confess, just the thought makes me curious enough to ask the space spirit to do it way sooner, just to test the limits of your skills. I won’t of course, I’m far too polite and well-mannered, but it would be interesting to know if even that isn’t enough to reach the limits of your skills. Oh, I hope it's not and the fact that you’d have your pair working together really leads me to believe it won’t be, I’d rather that not turn into a chance for you to escape into true godhood.

Hmm, as I write this, just to be safe I’ll be asking them to make sure they don’t pick the sun. they’ll be finding the coolest star they can (relatively of course) in the deadest region of space so that even if you do somehow escape or ascend, you won't be finding others any time soon. You will be alone with nothing but yourself to blame.

Oof, I got a little heavy there at the end, didn’t I? Sorry, I’m prone to both curiosity and getting passionate on the things that interest me so why don’t we end on a different note?

Now, as you can see there’s no food or water for you but honestly, if an immortal can die from those lacks then you really don’t deserve the name so that’s not a major concern and although you’re in an enclosed space I’m sure running out of air won’t be a major issue for you either, whatever changes your body went through will probably be able to make do one way or another, but absolute defense is a whole other issue.

See, I must confess that a couple of my skills don’t work on you because of it. It’s a little annoying but I can’t help but wonder how far it goes. It seems like your body, soul, and mind are all protected which means it lives up to its name, but it's the final aspect we’re going to look at.

You’re immune to mental attacks but does it leave you immune to the damage of your own mental processes? Trapped with nothing else to do, will it keep you from falling into hallucinations and nightmares? Will it keep you sane, even if that means it keeps you from escaping the reality of the situation you’ve been placed in?

I am genuinely so excited to find out, you’ll have to let me know but look at how long this has gotten, I’ve rambled long enough so let me end things here.

Be well and do your best to reflect on the way a person facing eternity should act.

Lots of love,

Ben Heph

Crumpling the paper as soon as he was done, Rook didn’t give in. It was obviously left there to scare him, to make him believe trying to escape was pointless, but he wouldn’t accept it.

And it was like the brat had said in the letter. He was immortal, meaning he had all of the time in the world to get out. The fact that he’d so easily narrowed in on something that went beyond his fears was an issue but it was one he could deal with, especially when it was so obviously a bluff.

The world had no great space spirit, even people with only a superficial knowledge of the powerful forces that made up the planet were aware of that, meaning it was nothing but an attempt to scare him. At most, he’d be able to get the archmage to do something but even then, she wouldn’t be able to carry out the threat he’d just made, it was nonsense.

No, he couldn’t let himself be tricked, meaning that he had to get out to kill him, it didn’t matter how long it would take, he’d make it happen.

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At some point, he’d accepted the mana exhaustion. It didn’t last long for him, as soon as he got a single point he was awake again unlike most people and he kept letting his pool fill up again and again before emptying it in its entirety, doing everything he could think to break free and not caring how often he failed.

At least that was what he was telling himself, but with each attempt ending the same as the last his heart started to tighten, telling him he really was going to be trapped there.

But who cares? He told himself after the dozenth attempt. It’s only a week. I’ll get out of here and then I’ll make him regret ever coming to the world. Just you wait-

His thoughts were cut off by the first change since he’d gotten there with the light turning off.

Something that shouldn’t have been surprising, it had been running for hours and he hadn’t refilled the mana that powered it in that time but it left him to fumble around for a bit until he could find it in the pitch black until he eventually grabbed hold of and poured his mana in.

An action that got him nothing. Not a flicker of light, not a speck of illumination, the world around him stayed dark with the enchantment that had been placed on it broken.

In that situation, with no way to escape and no stimulation beyond himself, Rook finally screamed.


Comments

It's going to be so funny when he meets Ogilt and thinks it's Ben trying to screw with him.

RageScholar

the funny thing is that rook is THEE candadit for this world to turn into, not only a multi-teir 3 god (he already is but even more so) but also a teir 4 whatever that is… like he has has thousands of years to get to that level and squandered it.

Pride mystic artificer

Didn’t see this chapter drop. I read the one after this and oh boy it makes that chapter even better because of the revenge on rook.

IdolTrust

If what we’ve seen of the guy is any indication, he probably actively ignores the loop.

Sesharan

Ooooof Get dunked on! How is he so out of the loop to not even know about the space spirit TFC

Rain

I don’t trust rook to know the difference between a "broken" enchantment, and one programmed to shut off and reopen later automatically.

Demolug

PaT mentioning the enchantment break supports the chemical battery interpretation

Corvusamous

It's more like the chemical battery just ran out.

Nicolae

I wonder if the light closed to make some kind of day night cycle to count the days left, or if it was just a disposable planned obsolescence lamp.

Demolug

I don't disagree with you on the information dissemination part. But you got to figure that Rook has to have used the Gate network recently since it states in the chapter that he can only teleport a few hundred meters at a time, and I doubt he's the kind of person to avoid using the gate network. He would have had to have noticed the hundreds of destinations that were suddenly available.

TheLostGolem

I never thought of it that way! Clearly Ben is just trying to help!

TheLostGolem

It would prevent the accumulation of edge that forms all these cliffs serial readers keep falling over.

Carl Mason

I decided to break a couple months ago from this story and I’ve done this a couple others times too. I hole heartedly believe this we novel is at its best when you read it in large groupings.

FutonJR

Y'know, for a space mage, Rook really doesn't know a lot about it. He feels his mana wrapping around strangely and finds himself returning to the point he started at and immediately assumed he was being teleported. This man has had like a thousand years to live and study and grow, and he doesn't even know what spherical geometry is despite having the one type of magic that could make use of it.

Alice_Because

That explains why he got evil intent awakened

Ralend

Ben's going to have to pour him out of that space, cause he will be reduced to a quivering mass from that level of sensory deprivation.

Tim

Humans start hallucinating after about an hour of sensory deprivation, so if he is similar this will be a terrifying week. There is a good chance he will experience touch based hallucinations. Just imagine feeling a swarm of ants crawling under your skin.

TBONEMAN

Only if it's based on connecting to Ben's mind. Time magic tho? No reason to think it different from space magic

Vorquel

Gosh, so many accusations of Ben torturing this man! Don’t you all know that Ben is the politest sweetest most innocent little scamp in the world? Obviously he has provided the estimable Rook with an opportunity— a small challenge to help him awaken his space magic! It was very brave of Rook to volunteer for the attempt, but he was clearly enthusiastic about it based on how quickly he approached Ben to lay his hand on the device.

Sesharan

🎵

Corvusamous

Rook messed with cre cre

Corvusamous

AND DESPITE ALL MY RAGE I AM STILL JUST A ROOK IN A CAGE

Corvusamous

It seems this setting has overall pretty slow information dissemination. Just look at how many things Ben learns of on the spot, and he tries to be quite informed

Clara

Ha! Yes! Precisely what i expected with the obvious difference that he's in a black void instead of a white one

Voidsong

People keep saying they hope there’s time dilation, but like…a week in this will probably be enough to knock rook off his hinges. This is -horrifying-

Silverias

Rook tried to kill him 3 times, just so he could hit on his girlfriend...

Frank Moore

I suspect Ben's RookeBall will hold Rook for a week in external time. I'm further going to go guess that there are serious time scaling enchantments on the Rookeball, as well as mental acceleration. And that the reality Rook is experiencing is a mental projection, such that no amount of space magic will help. That's why he won't notice the mental acceleration, because his apparent body-to-mind speed hasn't changed. He'll be in there for subjective years. Maybe decades... but it'll only be a week from everyone else's perspective. Welcome to Consequences, population 1.

Person

I knew Rook was arrogant.... but the level of arrogance astonished me. Apparently he didn't notice the rapid expansion of the gate network, or if he did, Rook never figured out who expanded it, cause the fact that he thinks he can break out with his level of Space magic is laughable when Ben is routinely materializing miniature portals ranking low to mid legendary for the purpose of saving 5 minutes on his morning walk.

TheLostGolem

İn today's episode of Geneva suggestions, our host Ben's recreated the famous learned helplessness experiment. Fascinating discovery of a willing subject Rook with skills just right for the job. Truly fascinating.

SacredSteel

Even better, when Ben releases him he should surround him with his clones and have them all speak in unison with him, would love to see his reaction to it after assuredly having plenty of nightmares/hallucinations about Ben while in his solitary confinement

KebabowyKrol

You forgot the best part. The space spirit has Ben's features. He would lose his shit when he sees two Ben's. One being the most powerful space mage.

SacredSteel

Rook would probably still try to deny it even if he met the great space spirit face to face, mf would go into denial hard

KebabowyKrol

I think it would funnier if when he takes him out he introduces them to each other

Isiah Debarros

HA! GOTEEM!!

small_brain_boy

TFTC!!

João Gabriel

It will probably do that when it awakens with his other tank/body skills

Isiah Debarros

Forget the armor, ring of imortality, Terra wont be lonely anymore lol, and then he could try to craft one for everybody on the planet, and just yeet people into space in hopes of escaping the planet

Redc05

Solitary confinement, sensory deprivation pokeball... Ben doesn't do half measures does he?

michael pigott

This feels similar to a black mirror episode.

PrimordialJay

We already know that resistances only reduce damage by a certain %. That and at a certain point you are immune to related status afflictions like getting charmed etc. Hence it's fair to assume that a forced teleport probably only takes more mana or ends up with a reduced range. But immunity against such an attack can probably only be achieved by an straight up immunity skill. The one thing space resistance is proven to be effective against: space attacks meant to rip you apart/ in different directions at once (that's a kind of damage that gets reduced).

Michigo

TFTC

CataFlan

Now here's a question. Does an Immortal Soul power better enchantments?

Magisch

welp, guess Rook is getting yeeted into the sun, that or he'll go full catatonic and stay like that even after getting out of the pokeball

KebabowyKrol

Jesus Christ, Mary, Joseph and the Wee Donkey that's so cruel! Ben really is cre cre

Sean Elliott

Nice! The schaudenfreude I feel from this is immense!

TheCrazyDuck

That would be nice, but in the message it sounded like Rook could defend against it.

Luboš Hemala

I mean just bringing ppl into his mind to study turns min/hours into days. Imagine what a high leggy made for punishment could accomplish ^^

Twmmy

That's definitely a week on the outside, I wonder how many years or decades that is in relative time

brig head the hung

A week outside, God knows how long inside, hopefully

Althion

Tftc!

brennon Petersen

"Kid you can't scare me, there is no such thing in the world as a great space spirit!" Famous last words by - Rook, the lost Immortal

Michigo

A POV is the perfect way to describe how this is going to go. I want to see a POV of when he gets out and the impacts this has had on his psyche, then for him to find out the great space spirit is back. I want to see his genuine terror.

Jed

Please for the love of something, have Ben lie in the letter saying a week.. But in reality it would be something closer to years ^^

Twmmy

What a nice sound at the end ! 😊

Kurotoshiro

Reeeee

james alston

pop goes the rook

Nicolae

Seeing as how Ben's lvl9 all affinity resistance, plus his innate resistances, are easily overcome by same level magic. I think once Ben gets t3 connect, he should be able to pierce through Rook's defense and connect to him, what with all of Ben's intelligence pushing at it. Which would mean he could enchant some really op armor

Clara


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