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Riddles in the Attic Part 2

Jenna's eyes darted as the house shuddered, as though it was incensed by her answer.

"What the hell was that..."

No response was forthcoming, save for a burst of light and energy that erupted around the would-be thief. The woman shrieked, as what could only be described as magical energy swarmed around her. Jenna's sensations were wracked, and it felt as though she was being dragged deeper, like she was sinking into a whirlpool.

Then, the shocking light show seemed to blink out of existence, gone as quickly as it had come. However, Jenna quickly realized that whatever that was had been more than a dazzling display.

She watched the window before her begin to rise to her eyeline rapidly, before she could react she felt a growing weight in her hands. The torch! It was bigger - and still expanding!

The woman's face turned from confusion to panic as the short stool before her looked like she something she would need to clamber onto. This was all happening so fast! Jenna took in her shifting surroundings, the entire world was growing around her. The torch was suddenly too heavy to hold, and in a moment her hands couldn't even hold it!

Either everything was growing... or Jenna was shrinking!

Jenna couldn't comprehend any of this, and her flight response kicked in as she decided she had to escape this house! 

Her still shrinking body turned and then she felt her right foot become stuck on something, then her left suffered the same! In frustration she looked down and saw the her legs weren't trapped in anything! They were just... stiff! It took all her might get them to budge at all!

She roared in frustration, without noticing one of her hands rising up unbidden. Her legs now weren't responding at all, in fact they were moving on their own, dragging themselves to a new position!

Jenna saw her other arm grow stiff and begin reposing itself - it was like some unseen strings were puppeting the shrinking woman!

Jenna's panic begin to rise, she was still shrinking and now her entire body was becoming unresponsive! It took all her strength to get a single finger to move, staring at it, trying to will her figure to respond in any way! As if in response to that futile effort, the woman's eyes then were dragged away and staring dead ahead. The woman's mouth twitched as she screamed in anger, yet the protest was muffled behind a now shut mouth.

Jenna was frozen - utterly paralyzed, her body forced into some pose that she couldn't even see. What was more, she was now a fraction of the size...

The thief felt a growing numbness across her body and her mind, and yet simultaneously her body felt aflame with a strange sensation. Her senses were being subsumed as something else was happening to her...

The magic wasn't finished with her yet, and Jenna could only stand there, frozen.

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Comments

Spooky hours!

Ivana

Very ominous!!!

ShrinkMaster 5000

Crescentwood Manor is full of surprises, it seems!! I had a feeling you'd enjoy that shot the most!

Ivana

Thanks so much for the kind words!! I really appreciate it!

Ivana

Interesting story. This is not where I thought it was going. I must say I really like the second frame a lot. While I do enjoy shrinking women of any size, as you probably know by now, half size is still my favorite. The panic in her face is perfect and she looks so adorable with that giant flashlight in her hand~ ❀️ Excellent renders, Ivana! 😊

Melissa

Thanks so much, Warin! You feel really keyed into what I'm trying to convey in my work so thank you for your comments!

Ivana

Thank you for commenting, Syrus!! I love seeing you post. We'll have to see what the manor has in store for our would-be thief!

Ivana

Thank you!! That one I definitely tinkered with a lot and was hoping I conveyed the moment well - so glad to hear you liked it!

Ivana

I like the story, you're a gifted writer Iva. Each of your stories are so engaging they put me in the story as much as the imagery

That1Dude

I agree with Nicole, the story and her internal thoughts as the magical transformation takes hold are phenomenal! My favorite renders from this set are the first and the last. Absolute chefs kiss to the framing of the shot, the lighting, and the effects you used here. The swill of arcane energy as the transformation magic initially takes hold of poor Jenna. While in the last render of this set, as her dwindled form takes on the pose of a tiny dancer, the attic floor has become her stage, and her previously dropped torch now the spotlight of her tiny performance. I'm very much looking forward to part 3! ❀️

Warin the Younger

Love the poses and expressions on her face showing she doesn't yet know what's going to happen to her, though the final pose shows us what's happening. Expecting a clothing transformation next. Love it!

Syrus Durham

Oh wow! I love this post, the lighting and her expressions are perfect! You really captured that tension in her lips and eyes, she's really struggling but losing the battle. Her pose is adorable too! The story is phenomenal! I love her internal thought process!

Nicole Corcoran


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