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Messy

"Are you listening, Alicia?"

The head of the marching order was definitely hearing her friend - how could she not? Maree had barely stopped talking since this ordeal had happened.

"Yes, yes, for the thousandth time, yes!" Snapped Alicia.

"Then why..." Maree continued. "Weren't we trying this plan two days ago?"

"He was around too often - it was the weekend! He's at school now."

Maree groaned. "No, don't try that. You were the one saying you could reason with your high school punk of a brother. Lucy, back me up!"

Lucy, who was bringing up the rear, had grown so tired of her two friend's bickering that she had claimed an entirely solitary area of the dollhouse they had been forced into. "Uh, maybe let's just focus on the plan?"

Alicia saw that as a win. "Yes! Thank you, Lucy."

The 'plan' was a series of creative solutions; involving lassoing the desk chair to create access to the drawers that would then serve as an anchor for a cable to climb down. It had taken the better part of the morning.

Maree heard the response and refused to yield any ground. "This plan was my plan two nights ago! Waiting around is how we ended up being given these ridiculous doll clothes to wear and sleeping in that toy house while your brother snored up a storm. I'm beginning to think that 'accident' with his science project wasn't an accident at all!"

The head of the college-educated pack rolled her eyes. "So, my brother, what? Figured out when we would all be at my parent's place, purposefully tripped over, and made us doll sized... why?"

Maree snickered ruefully. "You know he's always had a crush on Lucy..."

"Hey!" Piped the quieter girl from the back.

Alicia's face scrunched into a mess. "Would everyone just shut up? I know this is insane and all, I know my brother is way smarter than I realized, and I know he said the device just needs a bit more tinkering before its fixed, but I think he's stalling. He's always been a perfectionist."

Maree narrowed her gaze. "Well, I wish he'd apply that genius mind and perfectionism to our clothes and lodgings."

Alicia didn't bite, she couldn't argue about the poor state of their current arrangements. "I know where he hides it, and I reckon I can figure out how the device works. Let's just find it and we can get back to our regular size, okay?"

It was Lucy who pondered that. "What if we try to use it and it just makes things worse...?"

Maree was quick to answer. "It can't be much worse than wearing these itchy outfits and walking through the bedroom of a teenage boy. The stench is way worse down here...Eugh."

That brooked no argument from any of the shrunken women, as they ventured across seemingly gigantic terrain to what was hopefully their way out of this mess.

Messy

Comments

AHH so glad you liked it! I had fun with this one.

Ivana

Spectacular. I love how they look in the environment.

Doc Wonko

Cute little story! This was a fun read! 😊

Melissa

Ohoho, such lovely options! Suzie sounds terrifying! Lucy being the one who gets her height back feels right as well - so fun!

Ivana

Another fun angle could be after a few setbacks and a lot of bickering. They reach the device. An argument breaks out between Marlee and Alicia over who is going to be the Guinea pig. Lucy is fed up with all the infighting at this point and volunteers. Her height is mostly restored. The device then either breaks or the batteries die. With only a few minutes to spare before Alicia's brother comes home, Lucy scoops up the girls and the device, much to the dismay of her friends. On the ride home, their bickering over this turn of events stresses Lucy out, so she leaves them in her room on the dresser while she takes a well-deserved break. She'll deal with them and this problem in the morning.

Warin the Younger

Hmm. Maree's "It can't be much worse.." comment makes for some fun foreshadowing. Perhaps Alicia's brother is stalling and has set up these accommodations because the device has proven tricky to repair and can only shrink things at the moment. They go to all that trouble only to find themselves smaller and with nothing to wear. Another fun payoff would be maybe they get out of the room but unexpectedly encounter Alicia's 8-year-old niece Suzie who only finds them due to Alicia and Marlee's bickering over whether or not it would be better to try and get Suzie's mother's help or go for the device themselves. They get caught, stuffed in Suzie's front cover all pocket, and later suffer tea time before getting discarded within the toy bin. Now far, far away from the device. They find themselves with a new warden to contend with.

Warin the Younger

Thanks so much! I was happy with the framing here that illustrated their journey down to the floor. I applied a different shader to these and just didn't sim them to create a more 'stiff' look. What I really would love to find are assets that have clearly appropriately sized 'stitching' in the fabric. Would need high res toy outfits for that to work though...

Ivana

I had a feeling you'd enjoy!

Ivana

Ohh i love this! I love the dress of the girl in the middle

Emayna

Great story! And I like the evidence in the background of how they got down. Also good looking doll clothes. I was actually going to try something with that, just not simulating regular clothes and rotating them at, say the hips, at one particular point to show the "stiffness" in the material. Whatever you did looks great!

ShrinkMaster 5000

Thank you so much! I was happy with how this one came together! What do you think might happen to the trio?

Ivana

Lovely story, cute render, I love the last line!

Warin the Younger

Thanks so much! Starting 'in media res' can be a challenge sometimes but it can be a real fun opportunity as well - I really appreciate your comments, Greg! <3

Ivana

magnificent story (as setup or a vignette). I appreciate the time you take to establish your characters through dialogue and narrative. You have a real knack for getting personality across in a brief and well-paced style.

Greg Baker


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