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Special Detention

There were always rumors at high schools.

The ones about Ms. Lu were considered particularly far fetched though - that she had barely aged in her fifteen years of working there, that three students from her class over those fifteen years had gone missing. Only a few conspiracy devotees really put any stock in those.

Jane was not one of them, and so had been just as blasΓ© and disruptive in Ms. Lu's class as she always was. One particularly misbehaved day had landed the young blonde in an afternoon detention. It had begun normally enough; Jane didn't want to give the teacher much satisfaction and so had been giving the shorter, older woman the silent treatment. The minutes dragged on until the rest of the school had gone home, save for a few teachers who remained somewhere in the building. Ms. Lu had then asked Jane to write out an apology for her behaviour, and the teenager had steadfastly refused - claiming she wasn't a child and didn't write out apologies anymore.

The teacher seemed mildly disappointed, walked back to her desk, retrieved what looked like a vial of perfume and returned to Jane - the student went to speak but Ms. Lu abruptly sprayed the girl. Jane was furious and demanded an explanation, all that had come was, "If you can leave the classroom before I catch you, then I won't put you in detention for the rest of the year."

Jane had smiled ruefully, and went to stand when she realized she felt herself... sinking? Her legs were suddenly rising off the floor, she tried to stand and fell down onto the tiled floor where she watched the world rise around her.

Terrified; the girl realized she was shrinking!

Before she was on her feet again, she was shorter than a barbie doll and the previously short Ms. Lu was a towering giantess.

Jane screamed in anger and protest, and the teacher simply repeated her statement but now adding. "But if I catch you before you get through the door, then you come home with me and join my collection."

Jane swallowed, sweating, trembling. She couldn't be serious...

Ms. Lu went on. "Fairs fair, so you get a five second head start."

The teenager thought there was no way this was real, but as Ms. Lu said the word, 'five', staring down at the student, Jane had no other recourse but to run.

Her tiny legs sprinted as fast as she could, but she realized the entire classroom seemed different and confounding now - she wasn't certain which direction the door was!

The countdown ended, and Jane could hear the pounding footsteps of her tormentor. The door from the classroom was in sight, but Jane could hear the laughter of her previously short teacher, she could feel the pulsing warmth of her body hear nearing...

Jane just had to keep running!

Special Detention

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Ahh I'm so glad you enjoy the one-offs and short stories!!

Ivana

Thanks very much! And she really may not be up to the task hey...

Ivana

Perhaps Jane spends the next year living a borrower's existence within the halls of the High School filled with peril and adventure. Maybe she is found and doted upon by an underappreciated friend or falls into the hands of someone she bullied in the past and must make penance for past wrongs before moving forward. What I love about your short stories is that they make fun little emotional hooks that could easily be the inciting incident at the start of a larger tale, or left simply as a one-off leaving the audience to muse about what happens next.

Warin the Younger

Sometimes rumors are rumors, sometimes rumors are true, and sometimes the truth is worse than the rumor! Great angle and DOF. I don't think she's gonna get far... even with all that weaving between the desks and chairs.

ShrinkMaster 5000

Oooh, what a wonderfully chilling little story!! <3

Ivana

With a pout, Ms. Lu acknowledged Jane's small victory at the door. After all nobody had ever won before. She expressed her disappointment that she would not be adding Jane to her collection, but fair is fair. With a careful step over the tiny teen, she closed the classroom door behind her. Jane exhausted dropped to her knees with an audible sigh of relief. Only to be seized a moment later by terror as she realized nothing else happening. She was still small. Ms. Lu's pout turned to a mischievous grin as she watched this revelation play out across her tiny pupil’s face. As Jane rouse up to shout and protest this turn of events her words were cut short by Ms. Lu's reply. "I promised you no detention for one year, not the restoration of your height...However," she said with a dramatic pause "I am feeling in a charitable mood today despite your manners earlier... How about this? a rematch same time next year, if I win you join my collection, if you win, I restore your height. Seems only sporting. Think it over.” With that Ms. Lu turned on her heel and proceeded down the hall leaving the poor girl to contemplate her new existence and her next move…

Warin the Younger

Ooh, so true... hard to trust someone with those kinda powers in Ms. Lu's position! What do you think happens if she reaches the door?

Ivana

It sounds like Ms. Lu is 3 for 3 if the rumors are to be believed, that does not bode well for poor Jane. But I am a sucker for the little gal in these situations so I hope so. I'd be curious to know if the win condition actually restores her height. I've had enough dealings with quasi-mystical beings and cursed objects to know it is the little details that matter. If it doesn't there are a whole host of new adventures waiting for her just beyond that door πŸ™‚. She just has to reach it.

Warin the Younger

Thank you so much! Very glad you enjoyed it! And thanks as always for the comment <3

Ivana

Yes indeed! Thinking on her (tiny) feet at least! Think she'll get away? And thanks so much!

Ivana

I love the concept. Clearly this kind of detention is just right for recalcitrant teenage girls. Well done ! :3

Lloyd26

Smart move by Jane weaving underneath the desk and chairs. I love the perspective of the camera and the expression on both their faces.

Warin the Younger

Thank you so much! I originally had another story for this that I really loved but had to opt for something else &lt;3

Ivana

I love the geography here, what a creative pair of poses. The story is wonderful, you Nailed the feeling of panic and disorientation.

Nicole Corcoran


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