page 21
Added 2021-09-19 05:57:18 +0000 UTCNot quite as pleased with how the colours came out on this one. The last panel looks good but the other panels don't convey much depth I think.
I think I need to more conscious of light direction when choosing line thickness.
Comments
I was very happy with page 20
2021-09-28 01:19:13 +0000 UTCI appreciate your self-critiques regarding line and color, and I will take your word on that stuff, but I would like to add that this page rocks, it's intense and dramatic, moves fast, and somehow even in a little corner Jess looks super-hot, so please take that for what it's worth. Also, when you make a page you're 100% satisfied with I hope you'll tell us!
2021-09-27 12:56:52 +0000 UTCThere'll be a bit of captivity in this issue, not just the escape.
2021-09-25 03:33:00 +0000 UTCI’m in the “fix that for you”camp. I hope the mask stays!
2021-09-21 03:38:40 +0000 UTCI assume the rest of this comic is gonna be Hangman escaping and taking Jessica with him and the second comic will be Jess in her new captive life, may I throw out a cover suggestion for part 2, the old American Gothic painting but with Hangman posing with his rope instead of a pitchfork and a bound and gagged Jess standing next to him to complete the "happy couple' image with of course a suitably creepy house in the background.
2021-09-20 22:56:09 +0000 UTCYeah we all figured that would happen, great job so far! I’ve really appreciated how the beard makes hangman look crazier but also more… complete? than his old comic look. Is the next page going to be a bit darker than your usual work? Like the detail of her mask being askew after clearly snapping back. Can’t believe it’s already been most of a year since you started this thing 🙂
JeanWorm
2021-09-20 18:02:43 +0000 UTCYeahhh, it do be like that. But I didn't want to skimp on the story. Hangman's got some cleaning up to do before focus turns completely to Jess.
2021-09-20 08:32:33 +0000 UTCI'm sorry but I wanna say Page 21 is so disappointing ~~~I mean there's no new posture on this page
2021-09-20 08:19:33 +0000 UTCI'm still shocked you're putting in the extra effort to make panels with all the different gags. You really do go the extra mile and I dont think that should be understated.
Bluejazzysongbird
2021-09-19 17:07:49 +0000 UTCHello Telikor loving this piece you portray Hangman’s anger and skills well in the panel
Al-Azizul Hakim
2021-09-19 16:53:19 +0000 UTCOnly problem I see with the page is only panel of Jessica's sexy bound and gagged ass, great facial work on her again, you can once again tell she is cringing at the sight of the thugs being decimated, I also like the detail of her mask still being askew, I look forward to the next page, with the unpredictable Hangman I could see it going two ways, he could gently fix her mask in "let me fix that for you" way or just rip it off completely in a "you won't need that anymore" way.
2021-09-19 10:49:01 +0000 UTCJess probably wishes she could move about now. Thugs or not, they don't deserve this. But it's a scene with a lot of power to it.
Lathiira
2021-09-19 10:39:37 +0000 UTCWell...so much for those dudes. Great work!
Amaniwolf
2021-09-19 08:05:48 +0000 UTCLooks great, can't wait to see the rest of the story.
DaMar
2021-09-19 06:01:50 +0000 UTC
