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Hangman. Friendo. I can't help but feel you're at least partially responsible for this turn of events...

Sorry, once again, I'll get the gag variants up next. It's a surprising amount of extra work : S

But I am so very pleased with how this one came out. I've starting to feel comfortable with the Cut & Grad technique now.

edit: the gag variants are in! And I fixed up the missing ropes in panel 2 as some pointed out.

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Comments

I could certainly live with a few of those.

We need 21~~~~

I want to see Jessica's many bound positions~~~

Boob grab in PNL 2 is the chef's kiss. Awesome series.

Frelncer

Totally endorse this idea. I have joined and left many patreons where the cost of entry was higher and the quality of work was not even close to this level. Promote thyself, Teli, and they shall come.

You should post the middle panel and a few variants on deviantart and any other random place. It will get you a ton more patreons, and who knows maybe they could allow you to do this more full time. The middle panel as everyone has said is probably one of the best pieces of DiD art everโ€ฆโ€ฆ really. Expose that panel to more people

Malcolm

We don't deserve you Telikor, you have no idea how long I've searched for a high quality full damsel/bondage comic involving one of the sexiest and powerful superheroines ever created. It's literally a dream come true for me each update that I receive - I still can't get over how much talent and skill you possess. Keep it up!!

I also appreciate the hand boob grab. I know you're focus is DnD and not Erotica but that also shows how truly vulnerable she is. Hangman truly didn't think this through. She was in charge of the situation until he surprised attacked her and leaving her bound. SMH.

Everything this good fan said, I think the same

Wonderverse

This is superb work!

Bayezid

Nah, that's just sweat. I think it would take a lot more than this to make Jessica cry. She's a tough cookie.

Question and observation, is that just sweat on her face or are there some tears too? the sweaty damsel is underused and with the situation she finds herself in I can see some sweat, as for tears the crying damsel is underused especially with superheroines, I could see some tears flowing after she has been captive for awhile but not sure if I think she would be crying this early

Another great page, I like how we've seen things go progressively down hill for Jess, she started out so confident, just another routine night busting some thugs now thanks to Hangman she's at their mercy

Honestly I had pretty high hopes for this page after the tease of page 19 and... you have dramatically exceeded those expectations. My goodness, man, this is unreal

Zilch

I think I have a weakness for both. I agree with you on your assessment.

Wow, the art has definitely improved, this was great!

Amaniwolf

I think of it as "helpful." He's trying to steady her...;P

Teli has a weakness for the gloating face grab, mine is the "helpful" boob grab. I mean, we all know he's just trying to steady her. And all the hands on Jess, the wide eye, the sweat/tear drops, and the subtle intensity of the coloring...each new page is an order of magnitude of amazing wonderful greatness beyond the previous one.

Agreed on both counts.

Agreed. I love how he is now the hero coming to her rescue. That's when you know you're in real trouble.

Oh snap! you're right!

I HAVE TO WRITE IN CAPITALS TO EMPHASISE MY POINT! THIS COMIC, ARTWORK IS UNBELIEVABLE! PURE BRILLIANCE

Fantastic work. I've joined and enjoyed other patreons but I've never wanted to comment until now. This is a wonderful combination of style and character and I look forward to the rest of the story and whatever you do next. Thanks for sharing your amazing work.

Bruno Hamm

May want to add rope to the 2nd panel, it disappears and then reappears in the 4th.

Christian C

This unmasking panel! The dramatic & sexual tension! The artistry! Worth every minute of work you must have put in it. The "camera" filter even enhances the scene, in a way I can't quite pinpoint.

Owen Wazdaka Chivot

This story is heating up! Great page. Glad to finally see some unmasking peril. Will Hangman will stop them before the mask comes off? Or will he be tempted to take it off himself when heโ€™s done with these thugs? Looking forward to seeing what comes next!

Her head turned aside, that wide horrified helpless eye...possibly the best panels yet...Noted but not commented in depth the secure..ahem...grip..one thug has on Jessica ;)

Devduck01

An "unintentional" Boob grabbing. God this is good. :D :D :D

Ronin

I don't know what it says about me that every time you release a new page, it makes my day. However, I know what it says about you, and that is that you're an amazing artist and this story is a masterpiece.

destroxxiv

Loving the artwork itโ€™s definitely improving

Al-Azizul Hakim

Hangman and not understanding the social contexts of his actions, name a more iconic combo. Great page

Lucy L

I just realized that some variations of the gags would cover her mouth and help her identity. Like the OTN for example, the bad guys would only see her right eye.

A fan

That lip outline in the tape... *chef's kiss*

This Art Work is Phenomenal! Loving the Storyline. ๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ”ฅ

Tel, the constant quality improvement of this comic is something to behold. I couldn't care less about the gag variants, but I just have to say that you made some awesome improvements since you started all this with the lighting, shading, coloring, details... all of it. I'm really impressed. // Now, about the page itself, I really like everything that's going on here. The expression in the center of the page is excellent and I can really feel the rage of Hangman in the bottom panel. I can barely contain my excitement to see how this story turns out.

Wow, that unmasking is so hot. Keep up the amazing work.

Sleepy Comics

Love a public unmasking. That might be my favourite panel. Amazing work.

Tom


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