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Steel Eyed Faker Chapter 23: Evolution Part 1

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Dang this is getting intense

TokuGeek

Ah, the man of steel.

SsanghwaSilver

Tbh I didn’t even know Emiya could still heal without the sheathe or how gnarly UBW healing was. Loved the description of his body at the end. Hope he gets to explain some of it if the others grill him or demand therapy lol

SpeedyG

I think you should change the conservation between Najenda and Mine from 'a few seconds ealier' to 'a few minutes ealier'. Because there is no way all of this talk happen in just a few second.

fu Dkb

This is interesting. Right now we have stylus going on his own trying to take a chance to take down everyone. Then. We also have the prime Minister who has spear now. Most likely to use her as a hostage if not to use to find a way to take down Emiya and lastly we have Esdeath slowly unraveling. Ironically I feel that Najenda May end up making a move just to prevent her brother from doing anything reckless again. This is slowly going to get escalade very quickly.

Francisco Soria

Im surprised he didn't try to use rule breaker on Koro tobreak it's contract with seryu, if it worked it'd deprive her of her most lethal asset

FREEKYfreak

Feelings? Doesn't she see him as a brother?

IS6A6E

I hope Najenda finally confesses her feelings and kisses Emiya when he comes to. And will that fully sentient tengu be able to aid his recovery and physiology?

Hadrian v.E.

Thanks for the chapter~

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