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A Fake Familiar Reborn Chapter 37: Reconciliation

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Grayfia and Emiya's friendship is nice. I never found Rias annoying in any adaptation. At worst she was deeply flawed in few of the fics. She is not within my top favorite fictional characters but i do like her. Her imperfection makes more her attractive than if she was a Mary Sue. I was surprised she didn't show up later but I am guessing she is temporarily paralyzed by PTSD. In the past I was just joking and don't really expect Artoria in this fic but it really would be nice to have an Artoria in this fic make Emiya's life more complicated. If a lighthearted chapter is needed turn Emiya into his younger Shriou form for at least a chapter.

SsanghwaSilver

In fanfiction and in the canon series, Rias has indeed given off something similar to a bratty/spoiled girl feeling to her character. So I can see why some may dislike her.

NimtheWriter

Doesn't anyone else finds Rias really annoying?

Jesus Roldan

Como amo tu escritura en los fanfic es tan natural todo y mas las pelea lo malo los personajes de dxd son muy debiles los servant son espiritus de leyendas

AngraMayu777

Eh, never really liked Rias or Akeno too much. I gotta say, the best parts of this fic is definitely Medusa and Archer dynamic.

Reasonablefish

Not sure if Sona and Rider are going to like the revelation that Rias used one of her command seals.

Timurlenk

Honestly, I was expecting Emiya and Rias to have some kind of conversation about what happened this chapter. I'm kind of surprised that they didn't converse at all. Hopefully next chapter they can talk.

Daniel Fowler

It would be good if she could access her 2 versions (Saber/Lancer); the other thing is that she, even if it is slight, asks for the opportunity to be a mother and that by irony she has twins, a boy and a girl, with which they would be extremely loved and valued by Devilkind politics, but Serafall's ultimatum will be a possible deterrent to the extent

DerkKill

Oh boy does he have a story to tell to Sona. I also enjoy how casual Archer is about losing his arm which he is right it will eventually regrow as long as Rias is able to provide him mana to heal and Avalon should also speed things up a bit though not much since Artoria isn't around. The heartbreaking moment where Rias was genuinely scared she would lose Archer and used a command seal was excellent I felt her despair in that moment and how overwhelmed she and Kuroka was by not only Archer's Noble Phantasm but by him fighting off Berserker, Saber, and an out of control tannin. And to top it all off we got a nice little intimate moment between him and Akeno which I really enjoyed. More of Archer giving his girls the affection they crave which will probably be more now since he very nearly died and I can imagine Rias and Akeno won't let him out of sight. Excited for the next chapter!

Cody

Gotta love EMIYA. Missing an arm and he's just telling everyone "Jesus, you're acting like something serious happened." It'd be fascinating to see this EMIYA react to Post Fate Avalon Shirou.

meh

Grayfia gud

Gawain

I liked rider’s jab at Archer

Thomas Brantley

Oh oh, if i learned one thing than it is if Rider is joking, she is pissed.

PSYMEDIC

Buen capitulo

Neopolitano


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