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An Archer's Promise Chapter 69: Courage

Beta read by GameCrusher55, Fluffy Slayer and S

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A relative break of horniness. Nice. Even if it is relative. I got Tiamat and Draco in FGO very recently. This fic is probably influence how I am going to be looking at the latter.

SsanghwaSilver

Well that was a thing. Can't wait to see how prim reacts to all this. And Olga gonna be pissed. She probably gonna pressure archer into finding her and chole gonna be all love/hate about it. Though I wonder what Leona true purpose of doing all this is...

Ryujin Jaeger

Rip Chloe, she was just starting to change. Change in a concerning route, but hey, progress. I liked the bait and switch. We first thought Chloe was going have her time, then it ended up being Alicia of all people.

Matemeo

Prim tried to get Alicia raped. She'll be lucky to keep her head.

Hadrian v.E.

Somehow I have a feeling Prim is going to find out about what Archer and Alicia get up to and is probably going to be feeling mix of emotions. Slight jealousy with a tinge of disappointed to name them for being unable to involve herself with the action but ecstatic that not only are her cousin and Archer are on better terms but also physically involved now. Guess her dream of group activities is no longer such a pipe dream anymore. Although better she learns rather than the yandere goddess that’ll do who knows what should she find out.

Heroichunter

Gran capítulo, la primera parte con Anna y Grace fue muy gracioso, es increíble lo bien que estás profundizando las personalidades de personajes de un eroge. Alicia siempre me pareció un personaje fastidioso pero la redención es bienvenida y espero con ansias ver su evolución. Saludos desde Perú.

Luis Enrique Salazar Carrasco

Love the chapter and it’s nice to see that Anna and Grace made it to the Emerald Inn ok. Got a laugh at Anna being a troll by proclaiming that she and Grace are Archer’s wife’s thus setting off Alice lol Also nice to see that Alicia is finally realising her mistakes and getting a redemption arc. Sure the road to fixing her kingdom and gaining back the trust of her people will be long and hard but with Archer giving her some words of wisdom as well as giving her some love, both emotional and physical (which I do hope is in the next chapter!) that she will be ok in the long run. The last bit in this chapter is setting up a rescuing Chloe arc, which I hope will set up the eventual Archer x Chloe lemon at the end. As well as the murder of Chloe’s monster of her father. So in all great chapter and do hope to see the next chapter soon, with a lemon too.

Benny

Nah, didn't want to half ass that part. Want to take the time to write a proper one, so gonna probably be a double chapter update next time

NimtheWriter

It's high time for the (to-be) members of Archer's harem to meet face to face! Chloe sure chose a bad time to act on her urges and retardly running away aimlessly afterwards. Are 3 dots all there is to the lemon?

Hadrian v.E.

Looks Good.

GameCrusher55


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