An Archer's Promise Chapter 66: Chaos Part 1
Added 2024-10-11 16:27:11 +0000 UTCFully beta eta read by Shigiya and Fluffy Slaye
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Jeez Klaus need to chill. His wife is privy to things he's not and I'm pretty sure it was that way before Grave tried to bang his wife. Prim also need to find a bucket of water or something cause she's to damn thirsty. Also she should probably stop while she's ahead before Archer catches on and desides to actually kill her. While archer could use the help against Draco, I doubt he's going to let things be. Though this makes me wonder what other things Primms been up to? And Celestine is staring to embrace Yuno even more and thats not going to end well for anyone. She's (along with Primm) at the stage of contemplating if not outright trying to kill the other princess knights just to keep Archer's attention on them. Jesus Christ things are getting outta hand fast.
Ryujin Jaeger
2025-02-20 23:26:52 +0000 UTCAt this rate, Prim is going to find herself missing her head. Yes, Klaus, please do something stupid 🙏.
Hadrian v.E.
2024-12-18 20:47:00 +0000 UTC"Don't stick your d*** in crazy." - SovietWomble
SsanghwaSilver
2024-12-16 03:51:29 +0000 UTCArcher has to thump out their toxicity with some ol' fashioned BDE.
Hadrian v.E.
2024-12-16 01:05:29 +0000 UTCyeah would really love to see you write of Fate X taimanin story, that ones Archer would be great for plenty of women to love him and a plenty of enemies that need to be purged
RPendragon
2024-12-16 00:53:46 +0000 UTCCan one of your new stories be a Fate x Taimanin crossover with Emiya ending up in the world of Taimanin. Pretty please with cherry on top.
Jamieoeyes
2024-10-20 21:45:56 +0000 UTCIf anything he’s done with the prologue, and chapter 1-7 with them still on 7 about to end soon.
GameCrusher55
2024-10-13 23:00:05 +0000 UTCHe’s not in the last third, he hasn’t even reached the midpoint yet.
GameCrusher55
2024-10-13 22:57:33 +0000 UTCHello Nim, This chapter has given readers a lot to think about regarding the characters and their thoughts on Archer. I am curious what this will ultimately mean for who ends up romantically involved with Archer. I ask because you suggest that this story is or is close to entering its final third Sure, a big reason why Claudia would like Archer in her kingdom is mainly because she wants Radomira to be there. However, the level of involvement in her life that she proposes seems to suggest she at least subconsciously wants to be more than mere acquaintances. Meanwhile, we learn some truly disturbing things about Prim in this chapter. Should we still consider either of them potential romantic candidates for Archer, especially Prim? I ask because characters going to the dark side does not seem to be a dealbreaker in this story. Based on other posts you have made in the past, certain characters like Luu-Luu are not in consideration for romance with Archer. Yet no matter who else he ends up with, you have indicated that Archer will definitely be with Celestine who has crossed some pretty big lines. She has lied to her best friend and the other Shields about Grave's death and it even seems she has murdered one of Claudia's knights in order to hide Archer's involvement. Ultimately, I would like to ask if the number of and the specific characters who will be with Archer is still up in air and subject to change or if you have a clear idea at this point. I understand if you cannot answer any of this for spoiler reasons or because you do not want to lock yourself into specific direction. However, I am still interested in what you have to say regardless.
Caster796
2024-10-13 14:29:20 +0000 UTCI think that we will see Emiya act like a Counter Guardian. Even if Alaya was giving him a 'rest', the Counter Force summoned him as a Heroic Spirit incarnated in a world that needs to be saved. So I think that the apex of this fic will not be the human Emiya, but his true self as a Counter Guardian, just with more freedom than normal.
NamelessGuardian
2024-10-13 13:23:27 +0000 UTCEMIYA still doesn't realize that Celestine is a problem. Sigh. Hopefully, he can correct her before she gets worse. Who else would she be willing to kill just to hog him to herself?
ZaMAsu Autonomous
2024-10-12 17:51:00 +0000 UTCVery dark themes in this one. Imaging a scenario like this… there’s a reason I’ve avoided the source material for years, no matter how horny my internet wandering have gotten. Great chapter, Nim.
The_Flying_Wrench
2024-10-12 05:39:54 +0000 UTCFunny how Celestine is getting more and more Yandere as the story goes on.
Timurlenk
2024-10-12 04:22:51 +0000 UTCDepends on the word count and if I'm satisfied with the content. Under excellent condition, a 5k word chapter can take 2-3 days. 4 to 6 days in the absolutely worst conditions. 10k takes 4-6 days (I really want to avoid 6 days cause that's when I'm struggling with one part or two.)
NimtheWriter
2024-10-11 23:35:38 +0000 UTCHow long does it take for you to get done a chapter?
D D
2024-10-11 23:30:09 +0000 UTCThis is a good, but dark story I’ glad your not finished with it anytime soon, I hope to see this story too it’s proper conclusion.
GameCrusher55
2024-10-11 22:30:44 +0000 UTCHonestly this was an unexpected twist I didnt see coming with Prim. Archer doesnt know it but he will have to solve all of this building yandere energy the good old way with some sleepless nights so the women can get their emotional balance back lol.
Lotus92
2024-10-11 19:12:06 +0000 UTCHmmm, not 125 as that would mean I'm only halfway done. But definitely around 100 or 90. I've already started to plan for stories that will replace this one. Haven't made a decision yet but there are a few possibilities.
NimtheWriter
2024-10-11 17:35:02 +0000 UTCyou know I honestly don't have a clue about how this story will end I have a pretty good idea of how EMIYA beats Draco with him being buffed by Olga and given mana by Celestine while using Excalibur to defeat Draco but other than that I don't have a clue where this story will end. speaking of how long do you think this story will be until you think its fully complete since I think it will probably be around chapter 100-125 or so. what I want to know though is how the story is gonna play out in terms of archers relationships with the other characters since just about all the main women in the cast either love are obsessed with or are infatuated with archer hell even Olga is coming around as well. but prim and especially Celestine have been getting far more yandere like as the story has gone on and that is inevitably going to blow up at some point. I highly doubt archer is going to die though I am interested in him learning that he is actually free of the counterforce that part of the story with all of your story's with EMIYA archer generally tend to mostly gloss over him being free from being a counter guardian and how you will handle his reaction to properly learning that. well anyway I'm excited to read more of your EMIYA stories especially fake familiar with rider learning archers true name and all. anyway keep up the good work man I'm loving your stories.
Aliata
2024-10-11 17:19:46 +0000 UTC
