Dial: Call Resumed 3
Added 2022-04-15 03:57:10 +0000 UTCHey, you guys wanna help me come up with a title for this one? Every chapter is gonna be named from now on, and I thought it would be fun if we came up with one together.
Also. While Dial is going to be focused on his interactions with the greater Dialverse, I'm planning on making another fic that shows some of the other adventures going on while he's running around. Might take a while to write that one, but I think it's the best thing for the story. It'll be called the Dialverse Phonebook, and I'll start it up after this introduction arc is finished up.
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I actually have a plan in place for that. The Brotherhood boys ain't evil, just raised in bad environments and enabled by a very bad mentor. So my thought is that they need something more specialized to teach them. They're basically kids that need some real discipline and care. Thus, why the offer. So that BRIDGE can take them in and offer actual guidance. The school is important, I agree, but without a better mentor than Mystique, they'll just keep alienating the other students and causing trouble. So yeah. I have a plan, and I'm working on it. Also, the boys won't be child soldiers. Note that while they are told they can join BRIDGE, what Fury really promises is ' pay, training, and a place to live'. Not that they'll be fighting overseas or anything.
DesertChocolate
2022-04-16 16:53:36 +0000 UTCThe criticism I have is well you talk about not wanting children soldiers than you higher children soldiers. While the brother hood are not the best they are kids who’s lived can be turned around. Toad smell could be because he does not bath and has no one to tell him he needs to bath. Blob may have dyslexia, or that is what I thought as a teenager. It is a good idea to use money to get the kids but they need to go to school. They need to socialize and be somewhere they can learn to be regular people and not be viewed as mercenaries or weapons.
arnumart
2022-04-16 04:17:59 +0000 UTCHe's not allowed to be a bit happy about it? I feel like it was calm compared to the usual.
DesertChocolate
2022-04-16 01:49:04 +0000 UTCWait, I thought he was over the whole hero worship phase. He just we t through super powered world War and he is suddenly back to square 1?
Big ToFu
2022-04-16 00:08:22 +0000 UTC
