10.48 VS
Added 2025-11-02 01:18:35 +0000 UTCHope your teeth aren't rotted from all that sugar! Here's a chapter from the heart of Baleros that's perhaps a bit unsettling. (46,000 Words)
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Comments
Love love love seeing the main plot line advance. I will admit we’ve been in (admittedly fun) side stories for so long I’ve been losing sense of the story timeline.
Megatrex
2025-11-22 17:38:04 +0000 UTCI'm probably in the minority here, but I wasn't a fan of this one. I'm kinda dumb, and the split/confused perspective in this chapter was frustrating to track, took me almost a week to get through.
pratticus maximus
2025-11-14 19:55:24 +0000 UTCYes, thank you! Good chappie.
VelvetWash
2025-11-10 19:07:42 +0000 UTCI think she mentions in an earlier chapter that there once were satyrs in this world but idk
Patrick Sheehy
2025-11-08 17:09:02 +0000 UTCThinking about how Vofea is able to gain levels as a species which is not (?) part of Innworld and so won't have completed the Trials of Leveling. Is it because the fae were originally part of the Grand Design so are eligible to level or another reason do you think?
Bob47474
2025-11-08 13:16:45 +0000 UTCsolid chapter
Tommy S
2025-11-05 20:37:44 +0000 UTCI don’t normal do this this as don’t want to spoil it for anyone so trying to keep it spoiler free, compare to last time you did this type of writing I think you got better at or might be that you found away that they don’t know there on a turn based game last time every knew it wasnt there turn and could still see and remember things just couldn’t do anything. Also I think the way you mange to get the lore flush out about before “GD” i would say throw I didn’t like the bit where “GD” over powered the maze felt abit like cheating. That being said even though I moan about bits this is better than last time and can see how you develop the idea I’d give this chapter 9/10 p.s the bit at the end could do with some more info not sure who got what but sure we will find out
Dorian Moody
2025-11-04 22:55:47 +0000 UTCNice I have something to end my night with
electroflame
2025-11-02 01:34:11 +0000 UTCYES
Vedec
2025-11-02 01:20:39 +0000 UTC
