10.37 GDI (Pt. 1 to Pt. 3)
Added 2025-04-06 01:57:59 +0000 UTC...And with that, I'm on break! Thanks for your patience, and I will be back to writing next month. I hope this chapter lasts you...at least a day.
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I read all the 'bloated' comments, but I disagree. I think its more like "The Longest Day", many stories of many people, all the heroes of their own stories. TBH, I'm impressed that you can weave so many threads together into a tapestry. Oh, there may be a gap here, a sag there, but the whole hall isn't covered yet, and I am waiting to see it all. Keep weaving.
Aaron W. Smith
2025-04-28 13:28:38 +0000 UTCI know most people love everything you put out PABA, and I was one of them as well! Until this arc :(. I've written most of my thoughts and feelings in the websites comment section, but I just wish this arc wasn't so damn bloated. I wish the epilogue didn't invalidate some deaths I feel had a huge impact on the story and were what I considered bold but fascinating choices at the time. And I wish I didn't just lose my desire to continue reading this series. Oh well, time for my yearly re read and I hope whenever I come back, I can find the spark and the wonder that I just couldn't see in this ridiculously massive arc.
Arwen Lostlorn
2025-04-26 13:30:09 +0000 UTCWell it was only Khelta who made it back after making some deal with GDI. So [Queen of Undeath Level 6!] may happen… or doubt it but it could also evolve into [Empress] via a blessing from Sheita. As a reward for allowing her to live again and as a her Legacy holder. *shrugs* [Queen] is also perfectly fine. I just mention it as an option because Narhavia committed, that she could see herself in her, Erin just needs a guiding hand. (HER HAND! *cough*) If anything if she does get the class back I feel she should carry a mini Khelta Sanctuary Dome that grows in claimed land. Sanctuary for the living and “dead”. If anything the necromancer Village could further perpetuate her [Queen of Undeath] level. It would be even cool if her (un)peaceful [Garden] could synergies with Khelta’s. Heck God Erin saved Khelta… Erin deserves the class.
RedGoblin
2025-04-17 02:49:12 +0000 UTCWill Erin get back all the skills that she lost due to the souls missing after the resurrecton that now are restored or will she be left out again?
CromCruach
2025-04-16 22:12:27 +0000 UTCThe music video at the end <3
Dominik Zettelmann
2025-04-16 22:01:13 +0000 UTCAlso I just wanna say this, I want 10 volumes of the crossroads of worlds. 5 Erins and a goddess Erin on top, sign me up. Also fetohep, nerry, sheta and Sserys. I can just imagine all the chaos.
Nik
2025-04-11 02:09:24 +0000 UTCI don't care what anyone says, I loved this arc. I have criticisms but the biggest one being that I would really like a proper epilogue and see the consequences of this arc. I wanna see the new junior guardsman of Liscor. I wanna see Valceif meet his mom again. I wanna see it all but I know we're going to be starting the belaros chapter soon. I just hope we will see some of what's changed in the world, like calruz. It's been years, we need Calruz to be redeemed and a part of the story again
Nik
2025-04-11 02:06:01 +0000 UTCThey have been making references to the wheel of time series throughout the story, a different author n series they read in their hay day. The chicken thing is only this chapter and it’s too much honestly. It’s from another story called Beware chicken. Kind of lost my immersion with how many times it got suggested.
PearsMan
2025-04-09 20:14:56 +0000 UTCOMG this arc!!!!! So damn amazing and i don’t know how to feel about some silly web series making this 52 year old redneck cry like a baby. Yeah and guess what i’m from Alabama so you know we ain’t supposed to cry unless our college football team gets trounced.
Mike
2025-04-09 18:59:36 +0000 UTCAm I crazy or does it seem like there is more to this particular chapter set than is apparent to the reader? Is someone else starting a sanctioned fan fiction world? Is The Crosswords a reference to a different author’s universe?? Were there two Pirates and one is done writing????? Buh, I’m probably reading too much into it.
Dockle
2025-04-08 23:43:37 +0000 UTCLoved it ! Very satisfied with the end. I’m glad it wasn’t all for nothing and we have real consequences + characters I really missed. Enjoy your vacation ! It’s really well deserved
zinwam
2025-04-06 12:00:37 +0000 UTCThe whole arc was a crazy rollercoaster, and the ending an unexpected twist. I love reading this story.
Timothy Baril
2025-04-06 10:38:53 +0000 UTC
