10.31 (Pt. 1 and Pt. 2)
Added 2025-01-11 21:55:57 +0000 UTCThis one's coming in like a Snorlax (that's a Pokemon if you don't understand the reference). It is split into two parts for readability, but I have decided to release both at the same time! I might need more time for the next chapter, but here we go for 2025! (29,000 Words and 35,700 Words)
https://wanderinginn.com/2025/01/11/10-31-pt-1/
https://wanderinginn.com/2025/01/11/10-31-pt-2/
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Comments
I think I’ve spent too much time thinking of this all the bits are there with making the city fly, I was thinking you you could make one with magic like a wooden narrow boat (like a canoe) with wings with lightweight enchantment or something like that . flaps to control direction, and a spell of direction with just the destination its own tail and I think that would fly and so mad only goblins would think of it
Dorian Moody
2025-01-25 03:47:10 +0000 UTCInteresting twist at the end!! Loved the chapter.
Samma
2025-01-16 16:45:59 +0000 UTCAmazing. Simply amazing
longhairdfreak
2025-01-15 19:52:22 +0000 UTCSuggestion for the Webcomic: Add the ability to use the Left and Right Arrow Keys to turn the pages on the non-scroll viewer.
SureRuseUser
2025-01-15 03:23:56 +0000 UTCExcellent work. I love this worl you have created. I am honestly very grateful for it.
Evan Cermak
2025-01-14 05:52:01 +0000 UTCReally strong work!
Zack Mikeska
2025-01-14 04:11:18 +0000 UTCCan't wait until the appearance of Archmage Albert!
Dandy
2025-01-13 15:41:28 +0000 UTCNow I ifinished chapter two. it was Amazing! Great fight scenes! having the Kraken Eaters showing up at the end was a nice bonus too. I think all these chapters from this new volume have been some of the best work you’ve done so far. Things are getting really interesting with the system edition two and now that rags got a rocket skill I’m wondering if fightipilota is about to get her dreams class? Anyway can’t wait till the next chapter but I also don’t mind waiting :p
Christine
2025-01-13 08:03:42 +0000 UTCGood chapter! Welcome back! Glad to know u had fun. Shreikas section during the fight was beautifully written, best part of this chapter. The brass shedding his entire what? Outer layer? Kind of feels like it came out of nowhere and wasn’t convincing enough as a reader. Worse, He was constantly being compared to a cat aswell so for him to do something of a different animal kind of makes it even more jarring. This enemy being compared to the dead god Winter solidtice event where even the narrator saying THIS is worse….yeah no it dosent feel like that all. I don’t reccomend having bigger and badder bosses that dosent always end well. I think tieing it back to humanity would have just as equal or greater effect than an evil monster, since it’s more relatable (exp arcane season 1 silco and his humanity compared to season 2) Why are the literal incarnates of death human. U would think they would be literally anything else, something abstract? Maybe the fundamental building blocks of life and death? Also There being a bigger bad that the goddess of death kind of irks me in the sense we’re just pulling a bigger fish out of nowhere it kind of takes away from everything else. So the difference is she’s death based on ideas and their just death itself. Idk this whole multiverse hasnt been super engaging for me oh well. Getting to know magnolias hair is blond 10 million words in after alot of fanart has her with brown. Too late to change it in my mind. I always saw her with brown hair too let the audience keep their image. Same with the brass dragon and his uh hair I feel like that’s only recently been rmphaized but I don’t remember that all from the past and hard to start changing images 10 million words in. I’m not saying not to put it in but creative freedom of readers n all.
PearsMan
2025-01-13 05:08:12 +0000 UTCI just finished the first chapter..Come on Dragon Lord of Flames 🔥 you can do it!
Christine
2025-01-13 04:44:27 +0000 UTCIt's great to be here, thank you.
Max-Magnus Fritzsche
2025-01-13 00:57:03 +0000 UTCPaba starting the new year with an absolute banger. What a treat this chapter was!
Arwen Lostlorn
2025-01-12 15:44:24 +0000 UTCSQUEAK. (And I also have a Death of Rats T-shirt from Discworld Emporium :D )
Splutty
2025-01-12 12:56:46 +0000 UTCSnorlaaxxxxSnorrrrrr
Christine
2025-01-12 07:14:38 +0000 UTCthank you for the chapter!
Valmorian
2025-01-12 04:57:39 +0000 UTCHoly shit these were good
Thanatanos
2025-01-12 04:54:26 +0000 UTCWell, that's a gem of a reference, RIP Sir Pratchett!
C
2025-01-12 02:10:57 +0000 UTCI can't, I'm crying laughing reading the Rhisveri pov 😂
Ger3g
2025-01-11 23:04:03 +0000 UTCInnworld is made a touch more welcoming with a visit from the great Bill Door.
Eldritch Murder God of Crochet
2025-01-11 22:59:31 +0000 UTCIs that a breaking bad reference!!
Frostbound slammer
2025-01-11 22:56:59 +0000 UTC"Say My Name"??? Feels like a Tarantino chappie incoming better hold on tight.
Scott Soper
2025-01-11 22:22:58 +0000 UTCMy 2024 was pretty good ngl. 2025 be8ng better will require maximum effort and the grace of God.
WyrdWizard
2025-01-11 22:21:18 +0000 UTCMy night is saved!
Irideae
2025-01-11 22:11:47 +0000 UTCHis name is John Cena !!!!!! da na na
thomas j walters
2025-01-11 22:03:57 +0000 UTCPassword goes hard
A nice fire
2025-01-11 22:02:48 +0000 UTCHail to the king!
TB
2025-01-11 22:01:18 +0000 UTCI'm sorry paba but not even for you will I be able to not read it all on 1 go. I apologize, truly.
Nik
2025-01-11 22:00:42 +0000 UTCNOICE!
John B propheter
2025-01-11 22:00:20 +0000 UTCLet’s go!
Jordan
2025-01-11 22:00:03 +0000 UTC2025 coming great from now!
Ary Szpic
2025-01-11 21:59:42 +0000 UTCYeeeeesssssssss
Fitty Sebum
2025-01-11 21:58:14 +0000 UTC
