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Interlude - Saliss the Architect

I thought it was going to be a short interlude to gain my energy back. It was not. (24,500 Words)


https://wanderinginn.com/2024/03/13/interlude-saliss-the-architect/ 


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So stoked to get to see Saliss at work! Love Saliss chapters!

[Corrupt Cleric]

Raw and real

Skeys13

Still think it was a major mistake to kill selme. He was such a unique character and would have been perfect as a champion for lgbt rights, maybe in combination with Ivriss since they kinda already bumped into each other. In any case i don’t think chapters like these make sense. After the huge fight we still haven’t seen any major discussion about characters who have died. Selme literally vanished killed by symphony and erin hasn’t even talked about it or planned some kinda retribution to finally destroy symphony and all other assassins. And the lgbt plot is just not moving. It gets mentioned every 10 or so chapter but always as this super nebulous thing, then we get saliss having a nervous breakdown every time someone dares to mention it, and that’s it. There are so many other worthy characters that would be so much more inspiring in their fight against bigotry. Maybe they could even show saliss how stuck, afraid and self-sabotaging he has become.

Eugenio Cazzo

Well an author scared to show the world who they are is unlikely to do well on a narrative about standing up in the face of oppression its why I don't like these chapters

Eric Bruce

Digging up the city of pacts or whatever interests him more I guess

Cinnamon Toast

Would love to see some more of this arc

Ben

What happened to Ivriss being tasked by Erin to help in this specific task?

PearsMan

Saliss felt a little contrived

Gavin Olsen

I was thinking the same thing lol

Eric Bruce

I was confused about that part too. It just didn't quite make sense to me. I got that they were trying to talk about it being okay if people talked and acted differently but it just sort of fell apart. I honestly thought it might have just been me not reading it 'correctly'.. I love Saliss as a character, Rose is kind of 'meh' for me so I hope Pirate doesn't keep them paired up for long.

Sylver

I really enjoyed this chapter!! Thanks for writing it :D. The Turnscale subplot hits close to home for me and I'm excited to see where this goes. I enjoy the Saliss POV a lot, with all his complexity and flaws. Rose is... very easy to dislike (lol), but I think we'll eventually get that signature pirateaba moment of "Damnit how exactly did they get me to start liking this character that I lowkey hated??"

daigo

Wow, this chapter kinda suck especially when you have to read 30k+ words about something you don't really care about. Rose acts like she hasn't mature at all, I feel like Rose is trying to find some niche to hang onto for the sake of being equal to other Earthers.

Long Hoang

My money is still on Erin running off with the whole army to save the vanguard. That's what the evening news was about.

Scott Soper

Yeah, but he does have a point about letting his relationship with Chaldion and Pallas poison the public speaking well. Who would listen to the nudist about what's normal? (In saliss' mind) I think this plotline is ready for more movement, though. It's shame we had to spend time rebooting Rose knowing Saliss and couldn't integrate Illvris into this with his current marching orders from Erin.

Scott Soper

I love this subplot so much

SolsticeGoblin

Good chapter aba

Rukshan

Nah. The last story arc of a volume is when everything derails. If they haven't met by then, they won't meet until volume 12 earliest.

paksheet

It's does seam like we're getting a lot of filler between storys and another more jumping around idk maybe it was always like that and just got shuffled around latter on

Eric Bruce

lol

Ally

Interesting chapter, so the ball is slightly rolling regarding this topic. I didn’t really understand the ending. Why would other species who barley interact with humans (thus barley care about human fashion) care about Rose walking around in a specific attire (which was a suit right?). And what was that display? An act infront of what? a few people? I thought the point was to do it infront of a large audience or maybe it’s going to build towards that. Curious about Ivriss and his relation to all this since this is his quest too.

PearsMan

I think last chapter of Vol 10 is when we see Erin meet Neirs

Theo

This chapter was kinda meh. It feels like the lgbt trope just keeps getting mentioned now and then but no deeper conversation or event is happening. In our world the struggle for civil rights was fought head first. People spoke out, they published books, the protested and got it, they put themselves out there. How can you fight oppression and hate if you don’t even show yourself? If you don’t say to the world I exist, this is me, and I reject these cruel laws and injustices? How else would a different perspective even be visible if no one expressed it? Saliss is actually terrible, he thinks he’s had it harder than anyone but really what Rose is saying is totally true. People fought and got hurt and died and suffered for equal representation and the respect everyone is owed. Saliss acts as if this only affected him. How dare he say to other not to use a term to describe themselves? The truth is that he is a coward who just keeps making up excuses for not actually fighting in the open. He is probably deeply traumatized but it’s sad we are seeing this ongoing fight for fundamental rights and freedoms from the perspective of a coward. All lgbt fighters were in the open, they got hurt but never doubted that to counteract bigotry and hate they needed to be fully themselves in the face of a spiteful and idiotic society. I think there’s braver people from whose eyes we should see this struggle take form in the wandering inn.

Eugenio Cazzo

I don't think Saliss chapter can ever be short at this point....Great chapter..

Gaurav Patil

Late chapter You need to just spend one entire day in bed just lazing around or something

Captdeth

First

Stephen


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