9.46 S
Added 2023-06-10 23:40:04 +0000 UTCOkay, hear me out. I know. I know. I'm taking today and Sunday off. But I did it in one sitting. Which makes it better...? You can't organize writing like a timetable. But I am going to take the rest of my weekend. Now, you read this. It's craaazy stuff. (21,500 Words)
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Look forward to listening to this when it comes to audible. I bet the section in cat language is going to be a laugh when recording 😹
T34Z0MB13
2023-08-29 08:50:45 +0000 UTC:)
Fitty Sebum
2023-06-22 11:00:45 +0000 UTCI love the book and never like to skip chapters even for pov characters that aren't my favourite but this one was rough, the Rinu stuff was really hard to get through. Oh well, at least we got some Demon development
2023-06-14 05:08:36 +0000 UTCPitateaba, have you thought about making a chapter for Ama the [Necromancer], she just met Erin and her crazy inn. I’m sure her emotions and thoughts are going crazy. I’d love to see her journey before and after meeting Erin. She lost her apprentice didn’t see? How was her emotional state? How about afterwards, how is she dealing being a [Necromancer] in the open, what are her thoughts on Erin, her new class and etc. I really want to see more chapter about her
Erik Reynoso
2023-06-13 16:31:00 +0000 UTCMy plan is, bear with me, to fake a coma tomorrow and the next day so I can read the twelve flippin chapters you wrote since your "break." Do comatose people have open eyes? No. That's other...less fortunate people. Well. I did always want to fake my own death. No time like the present (and no present like time (snatch this ring from my hand, grasshopper) )...
Fitty Sebum
2023-06-13 01:47:33 +0000 UTCI would also say that she’s underestimating Earths ability to respond in kind to plagues… it’s not like innworld rocked their yellow rivers handling. Also, it should be noted that just about every overpowered spell we’ve seen deployed is ACTUALLY relatively localized in effect, safely deployable in innworld and limited in use only because they are relics/hard to reproduce….. Earth doesn’t deploy WMDs because we are existentially worried that too many will go off and we’ll render our planet unlivable.
Eitan G.
2023-06-12 16:48:41 +0000 UTCIt’s possible time is speeding up on innworld Earth, since it’s 2024 there, while still being 2023 here.
JumpingPotatoSack
2023-06-12 16:36:48 +0000 UTCEarth years are faster, but we aren't going to reach tech singularity that quickly. I would say that Earth will be roughly the same tech and army wise if only slightly more militant because of the disappearances and martial law etc. I would say that Silvenia is underestimating mass production of weapons of war as well as the number of guns in Nebraska.
Jack Barrett
2023-06-12 15:42:41 +0000 UTCCmon but think of fight scenes! You can’t tell me you don’t wanna see a brawl between Grimalkin and a 8 foot tall super soldier Space Marine?
JumpingPotatoSack
2023-06-12 15:39:25 +0000 UTCi wouldn't like to see them meet at all but it would be nice to see more magitech from black mage i started rereading and i felt like the unwillingness to share tech was way over the top in vol. 1
Eric Bruce
2023-06-12 12:09:14 +0000 UTCI have a seasonal business. Summertime = 18 hour days. I get up, rush around, go to bed. 7 days a week. Started late May. I'm training people now so in a week, I should be able to take a day off lol. Hah! Thus the empathy for dear Pirate working so hard. :) Thanks for asking.
Fitty Sebum
2023-06-12 00:56:29 +0000 UTCI’m really hoping that Earth isn’t gonna just get absolutely rolled if there is a big conflict. Like I’m hoping that while Silvenia got the shaman earth technology knowledge and stuff, it turns out Earth has actually gone full Golden Age of Technology and now got space marines and even BETTER guns.
JumpingPotatoSack
2023-06-11 23:24:06 +0000 UTCCatboys in 2024. Truly the West has fallen.
JumpingPotatoSack
2023-06-11 18:37:44 +0000 UTCWhy not?
Jeff Gault
2023-06-11 14:53:37 +0000 UTCThanks for the crack!
Alvin Baena
2023-06-11 11:33:05 +0000 UTCIt is literally *killing* me that I can't read all this now. One more week. Then I can sneak in a chapter. Until then, I'll just be dying slowly.
Fitty Sebum
2023-06-11 10:10:54 +0000 UTCIt is known.
Fitty Sebum
2023-06-11 09:58:34 +0000 UTCPirate. Why are you so amazing?
Fitty Sebum
2023-06-11 09:52:43 +0000 UTCPirateaba, the reason why I wish for a similar character to Madara is because I was hoping for more, how you introduced the “Demons,” it was a little dull. I love your work, I’ve laughed, I’ve cried, you’ve even frightened me while reading your story. But the “Demons”, yea they are legends, you gave them a shock factor while introducing them. But they won’t make me cry, they haven’t hit my heart. Maybe their moment hasn’t come yet, I know their past’s are kinda a mystery. But, please when you give the “Demons” the spotlight, make it as brilliant and magnificent as the skys. Ahh, maybe ignore the Madara part, I just finished watching a few episodes and it got my heart pumping lol. Love your work.
Erik Reynoso
2023-06-11 05:05:05 +0000 UTCWhy is this chapter so heartbreaking to read. A person can hear their story and say that their goals are noble but alas, war can turn noble people into “Demons.” Pirateaba, have you already developed the Demon King’s personality? His or her goals or believes? Have you already developed him or her? If you haven’t, I hope you can get INSPIRATION for him in Madara Uchiha. Perhaps a similar personality or journey, in his youth perhaps. If not, at least consider introducing the Demon King in the past. As he grew to be a badass with us not knowing we were following his journey. If not the Demon Kings, perhaps you can introduce a character who will become a Deathless, as we follow his journey. ( I still believe you can get inspiration from Madara Uchiha) if not him, at least get inspiration from this quote. “Wake up to reality! Nothing ever goes as planned in this accursed world. The longer you live, the more you realize that the only things that truly exist in this reality are merely pain. suffering and futility. Listen, everywhere you look in this world, wherever there is light, there will always be shadows to be found as well. As long as there is a concept of victors, the vanquished will also exist. The selfish intent of wanting to preserve peace, initiates war. and hatred is born in order to protect love. There are nexuses causal relationships that cannot be separated. I want to severe the fate of this world. A world of only Victors. A world of only Peace. A world of only love. I will create such a world. I am. The Ghost Of The Uchiha For truly this reality... Is a Hell.” -Madara Uchiha
Erik Reynoso
2023-06-11 05:04:08 +0000 UTCWell, at least you're admitting to yourself you have a problem with counting :)
Splutty
2023-06-11 00:47:44 +0000 UTCbrrrrRrRRrRRRrRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRR
afgasd adgasd
2023-06-11 00:03:05 +0000 UTCYou are a menace to society and all other writers run in fear at your mere presence. In other words: NEW CHAPTER GO BRRRRRR
Owen Kaz
2023-06-10 23:48:39 +0000 UTCPraise be🙏
Mayed Bin Shabib
2023-06-10 23:43:20 +0000 UTCbro how
OGTICK777
2023-06-10 23:43:15 +0000 UTC2m
Captdeth
2023-06-10 23:42:47 +0000 UTCEnjoy your weekend Pirate! You earned it.
Dustin Warner
2023-06-10 23:42:18 +0000 UTC