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Interlude - Stories

It has been a rough last few days. But I got a chapter done despite it. (26,000 Words)


https://wanderinginn.com/2023/04/01/interlude-stories/


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Pirate, just commenting to let you know that this is what I would call good writing. You danced across multiple subjects and points of view. You kept a coherent thread while moving multiple plot points forward without getting bogged down. A lot happened and I never felt the need to address my suspension of disbelief. It was one coherent stream that carried me from beginning to end. Please give us more of this and less of the chapters where we drown in one viewpoint. In saying this, I don't refer to chapters involving Erin. I would happily take as much Erin as you can give us. Best of luck resolving whatever digital problems you may have.

chump1999

This is how they make their money. Time is a valuable resource for some folks and they can't afford to waste it picking out parts.

Randomdigits

Great chapter, P'aba. Thank you. Hope you get your new laptop soon.

Deepak Kamlesh

I would suggest looking into building the PC yourself. With a little bit of care put into watching compatibility among the parts, and adding them, it is actually like using Legos thanks to the modular design.

SureRuseUser

I scored 20!

Oliver Carohan

hey so i know proxy stuff exists but can i buy gravesong legally somehow (in Germany)

Hope your new pc shows up well before it’s estimated date. Thank you for working through an aggrieving situation. Liked story-time. πŸ’–

Pherosis

I really hope that computer exploded is not a true event. Thanks for the chapter.

Hydrix

Oh man that is rough, stay safe

Benjamin Hamilton

O NOOOOO!! I hope all of your work is safe and sound. And...thanks for the chapter with all the fire and stuff.

Fitty Sebum

yay! early post! just in time to procrastinate work on my thesis!

Jackson Andrews


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