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Added 2022-01-16 01:33:08 +0000 UTCI'm off break! Did you read the book yet? Here's a novella. (29,200 Words)
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Comments
I love the king and his vassal’s chapters the most
SaintMaceToTheFace
2022-01-19 06:59:37 +0000 UTCLoved the book, and I definitely want to read more about this parallel journey. I also enjoyed listening to the songs - some of them new to me - and watching the slo-mo walk video :) In chapter 1.06 P, I believe that this is supposed to be Ser Dalimont rather than Ser Dalius: He was bowing to Ser Dalius. The [Knight] bowed stiffly, and Seraphel waved a hand, although her face was pale.
Gandeida
2022-01-18 20:22:58 +0000 UTCHad the same thought, butt didn't want to derail conversation. Kasperov's games with deep blue were also set up in such a way as to give the computer an advantage and not devalue IBM's investment though I'm sure we could do better than deep blue now.
Froyo Baggins
2022-01-18 15:17:59 +0000 UTCLoved the book!
Jenny Farmer
2022-01-17 21:02:27 +0000 UTCI want to note that Trey is wrong. Chess has not been solved. It is, in theory, a solvable game, but current computing power is VERY far from enough to solve it.
2022-01-17 11:23:26 +0000 UTCLiked the book. Liked the chapter. But as always, I always prefer anything to do with Erin first and foremost followed by anyone who has ties to Liscor with my favourites being the Antinium and the Horns (and Fehotep).
chump1999
2022-01-16 22:12:38 +0000 UTCI'd say go ahead as Pirate said: "To use a Toren metaphor, imagine this is an undead skeleton. If there are new parts, think of it like Toren replacing his hand or polishing bones; the body remains. The only big removal will be song lyrics, which I have no copyright for...yet. The published version will have them in, but I have edited them all out in this version. You can still see the song name in such places, but the experience in changed and that is the one huge difference I can point to." Actual core story content should be the same. Only removal are song lyrics. Any further revisions would just be polishing the wording here and there and perhaps improving grammar/syntax as such.
DThornz
2022-01-16 20:22:14 +0000 UTCReal talk guys, should I read gravesong, or should I wait for the final form? I definitely wont reread soon so it's about how much it will alter the experience.
Froyo Baggins
2022-01-16 19:17:48 +0000 UTCLoved Gravesong, I was glued to my tablet every night
Rusty Shackleford
2022-01-16 19:03:06 +0000 UTCOoooo! Now I can't wait for the next chapter of wistram!
Chargcake
2022-01-16 11:54:19 +0000 UTCThe book was incredible! Can't wait to find out how Cara meets the other earthers, and who she contacts to make the song crystals. And what her Class evolves into when she becomes basically world-famous.
Ignat Remizov
2022-01-16 10:23:05 +0000 UTChow can you even ask that, we ducks are full enough already! Absolutely bursting!
Ignat Remizov
2022-01-16 10:21:41 +0000 UTCThat was a very fun chapter. Felt like a spy novel. Poor pigeon.
Matt
2022-01-16 07:04:05 +0000 UTCThe book was great and so was the chapter. The book is definitely a much smoother entry point into the Wandering Inn than the current Volumes 1 and 2 are.
Atlas Dwarf
2022-01-16 07:03:40 +0000 UTCGravesong was everything I hoped for and more -- then again, that's sorta the Wandering Inn experience in a nutshell, isn't it? Looking forward to the rest of Cara's story :)
JasonD
2022-01-16 05:33:10 +0000 UTCHalfway through gravesong and i love what i see so far.
NaO
2022-01-16 02:27:22 +0000 UTCI binged Gravesong less than 30 minutes after you dropped it. Really good! When is book 2? ;)
Steven "Bull" Ratkovich
2022-01-16 02:16:54 +0000 UTCThe book was mostly great, my biggest hesitation is that you said you were going to do another editing pass (which we all know really means you are going to write another 50k words 😂) Other than the fear of missing out, it was awesome!
Craig
2022-01-16 01:49:32 +0000 UTCBook was fantastic
2022-01-16 01:37:56 +0000 UTCPirate: Read the book yet? Me: Ah about that been going at it but it is a lo... Pirate: Here's a novella Me: Dammit Pirate
DThornz
2022-01-16 01:35:02 +0000 UTCLoved the book! Book 2 next month then?
2022-01-16 01:34:32 +0000 UTCSqueeeeeee thank you!!!
Hope D
2022-01-16 01:34:08 +0000 UTCPog
billy herrera
2022-01-16 01:33:38 +0000 UTC