8.49 M - Revised
Added 2021-10-27 00:51:26 +0000 UTCThe edited chapter is out! And it's about your favorite character! Go read! Huzzah! Big thanks to Barbara Clark for the hard work! (36,800 Words)
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What a fucking masterpiece 🥺🥺🥺
SaintMaceToTheFace
2021-11-05 06:38:09 +0000 UTCReading the Interlude- Conversations right now. Read the unedited version of this chapter first. Just found out Mrsha is at the meeting of the Tribes!?! Lol going to reread this now 😅😝
Skeys13
2021-11-03 16:44:31 +0000 UTCI decided to read the unedited before the edited chapter and didn't realize what the editor's notes would entail... so I ran into some spoilers (and for my favorite character!) before I skipped the notes and read the story (then went back). I would appreciate if those notes were at the end but I guess most people probably read the edited version first and would be most interested in the notes being first. So maybe I should just shut up and do what they do. Seeing the notes was interesting and I agree with some of their points about confusion. Other points seem to be a lack of context. I mean jumping into a story >8mil words deep has to be intimidating and would probably require more research than time would allow. I disagree with the repetition of words, though. I think of it more as a stylistic choice. After a certain point you stop noticing things like that and it just becomes part of the voice, yes? Thank you for all your hard work and wonderful imagination.
Rico Anthony
2021-10-28 10:35:23 +0000 UTCOutstanding chapter. It nailed several recurring themes - fallibility of parents, juxtaposition of small and large events, grand strategy. The prose itself felt significantly more polished and the resolution was genuinely moving. TWI at its best.
Tom Seaton
2021-10-27 21:06:20 +0000 UTCI liked this chapter, but ngl the Kismvr chapters were so outta the park that it sort felt normal. :)
Zageron
2021-10-27 15:21:50 +0000 UTCDone with the chapter and it did not disappoint! heartwarming and touching chapter! Loved it ,I rate it with the attack on Erin chapter, just Amazing!
CromCruach
2021-10-27 14:21:41 +0000 UTCAre you kidding me? I've been sneaking in a few pages while at work as much as possible and I'm at around 50-60 % and it's sooo good so far!
CromCruach
2021-10-27 12:09:50 +0000 UTCBoy I don’t know what happened in this chapter. It was well written but 60% of the chapter was like when will it get better after skipping and hooping it got better. Am sorry
Caanbo
2021-10-27 11:15:54 +0000 UTCCan we please take a moment to recognize a god of story telling that walks these lands? I bow to thee Pirate <3
Zeddicus Zu'l Zorander
2021-10-27 08:20:20 +0000 UTC“Marathon run” !!?
Ali The Highest.
2021-10-27 07:51:16 +0000 UTCGod tier
luxrus
2021-10-27 07:49:41 +0000 UTCThank you for the chapter pirateaba! I always look forward to edited chapters, the story always progresses, and following chapters are better. Keep up the good (god) work. Remember to rest, the ducks in the pond can patiently wait. We're not geese, I think.
Alvin Baena
2021-10-27 06:43:16 +0000 UTCM is clearly for Maviola. Bring on the Toren.
Atlas Dwarf
2021-10-27 05:26:56 +0000 UTCI'm not crying. I'm just cutting onions. I'm glad we had a happy conclusion to this chapter.
Matt
2021-10-27 04:44:50 +0000 UTCWoo! Toren chapter! Yeah! I'm so excited and would be utterly crushed if not for it being about Toren!
John Koor
2021-10-27 02:13:38 +0000 UTCRefreshing worked! Xd
Toni Pampliega
2021-10-27 01:00:58 +0000 UTCI thought we were past the troll chapters…
2021-10-27 00:56:25 +0000 UTCPlease tell me that the chapter isn't based on sour puss pursua and pirates just outta passwords 😭
Umar Musa
2021-10-27 00:52:49 +0000 UTC
