8.42
Added 2021-09-19 03:04:40 +0000 UTCIf I was an artificial intelligence, this story might come out faster. But I might also destroy the world. Always a catch (29,700 Words)
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Great chapter!!! Love it!! ❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️
T34Z0MB13
2021-09-23 06:00:14 +0000 UTCNope. The chieftain said he didn't know who grabbed her. Doesn't mean he didn't give the order and someone else assigned others to do it. So even though he ordered it he can honestly say he doesn't know who did.
Cory Newton
2021-09-21 04:08:37 +0000 UTCive left 3 to build up. this is hard werk. and another one out tomorrow!
Rukshan
2021-09-21 03:24:43 +0000 UTCExcept the plains eye tribe clearly didn’t know. They didn’t even know the mage had been coerced into lying by people claiming to be them.
Chris
2021-09-21 01:42:06 +0000 UTCOh. Oh my. Spoiler alert... The Plains Eye tribe *knew*. Way back when. That's their only thing; they can "see", and could see the crystals that did this. And I bet they were a little weak tribe, and the drake's gave them a deal...and now they are the biggest, strongest tribe. And they push hard for the "old" ways. That the gnolls can't do magic. That anyone who pushes otherwise is "removed". *That any white gnolls, who have magic power despite what has been done, are "Doom" and must be exhaustively hunted and killed.* They literally betrayed their people for a deal with the drake's, way back when.
Dustin S.
2021-09-20 10:13:11 +0000 UTCI'm guessing at the time when your at war with the vampires there would be a lot of motivation for a lot of people and everyone did it and just house byres kept it up with most water supplies like wells being contaminated already.
luke eustace
2021-09-20 08:59:18 +0000 UTCFaster? My perception of reasonable word count is already horribly skewed by the current pace.
2021-09-20 04:25:00 +0000 UTCBrilliant chapter Pirate!
Deepak Kamlesh
2021-09-19 19:24:19 +0000 UTCOh man... Crippling the magic of an entire race?.. That's just bad karma. No way that doesn't come back to bite you.
Flying Dutchman
2021-09-19 15:56:39 +0000 UTCAh, great chapter as always
Alvin Baena
2021-09-19 13:36:30 +0000 UTCActually this one seems more plausible to me because the explanation is ...magic. which can and is acceptable for writing fantasy, on occasion. Plus the fact that all gnolls are on new continent, mostly. The vamp conspiracy made less sense, because you'd have to practically douse the whole continents water supply in expensive silver, and consistently throughout the ages. The five families would need to be involved and have to know, but we haven't heard from them yet. Still, I am enjoying these twists immensely.
Sky
2021-09-19 10:56:50 +0000 UTCVery interesting chapter!
KDP
2021-09-19 10:54:35 +0000 UTCI consider the world an acceptable price.
David Giles
2021-09-19 10:45:26 +0000 UTCThe whole vampire conspiracy thing didn't seem plausible... And this one doesn't either.
Kevin Choi
2021-09-19 06:34:40 +0000 UTCStunning
Nongers
2021-09-19 05:41:06 +0000 UTCOoooooh shit its all coming together
luxrus
2021-09-19 05:07:26 +0000 UTCIf you destroy the world....we could all move to innworld. I can't decide which class I would choose.....not a clown....
matt emmons
2021-09-19 03:57:00 +0000 UTCI'm grateful you're authentic and not artificial. Imagination is organic.
JazBird
2021-09-19 03:35:54 +0000 UTCAs long as you destroy the world after the story is finished.
Umar Musa
2021-09-19 03:08:36 +0000 UTC
