8.22 HE
Added 2021-05-11 23:05:25 +0000 UTCI'm off my vaccine-break! Which sucked! But hopefully the chapter is good! (29,200 Words)
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Great chapter!
T34Z0MB13
2021-05-16 16:21:26 +0000 UTCI mean wasn't it a human though? Could just be an earther trying to sus out if there are any others
Piratehunterzoro
2021-05-16 02:34:40 +0000 UTCStarting to get Erin withdrawal symptoms.... finally read past half way. Got my fix.
Victor Mijares
2021-05-15 01:21:47 +0000 UTCThank you for noticing that, I overlooked it and had to smile just now
Daniel Brickwell
2021-05-14 21:18:41 +0000 UTCIt seems a bunch of people didn’t like it. Many never played it. I liked it too, though in a groan, cheesy kinda way. My only negative thought is that reference could make Innworld potentially being a video game after all, that question was asked and thrown own in the first few chapters really. Except technically never proven. I chuckled, but think in the long run, would be a bad choice. It pulls you out of the story.
longhairdfreak
2021-05-14 14:23:54 +0000 UTC“Hey, you. You’re finally awake. You were trying to cross the border, right? Walked right into that ambush, same as us. And that [Thief] over there.” Nice
JumpingPotatoSack
2021-05-13 17:04:33 +0000 UTCI was confused when that Ailendamus duke somehow scried Ryoka's Japanese name through the Drathian/Chinese hanzi
sharkattack
2021-05-13 09:07:50 +0000 UTCNothing, absolutely nothing.
OneAngle Heaven
2021-05-13 05:55:41 +0000 UTCWonder how Wistram is doing against the Dead Gods.
Maniac000
2021-05-13 05:54:20 +0000 UTCJapan and or oriental asia, as cognita recognised eldavin speaking mandarin when summoning his sword as "drathian magic"
Umar Musa
2021-05-13 02:43:40 +0000 UTCAlso, really love the story
Tristen Houlihan
2021-05-13 00:41:45 +0000 UTCIs Drath Japan?
Tristen Houlihan
2021-05-13 00:41:25 +0000 UTCIdk, it's hypocrisy for me. Terrandria have slaves bound to land, but they *named* differently, so it make it different? Aliendamus capturing innocent knights to sell them lately, same with Roshal. Izril is always at war Gnolls vs. Drakes vs. Humans, they literally feed Bloodfields each year without reason, just "tradition". Izrilian humans used assassin guild against each other in addition to fighting with Drakes. So for me Chadrar is just bold and direct about war and everything, without trying to mask it in "good words" like democracy. I see how this can hurt someone's eye tho, because when there is no curtains before them, you can look away. On that note, it would be interesting to see more chapters about live of Chandrarians, like was market chapter. For example, nude drake's story about his apprenticeship in Chandrar. Or how noname village lives. Just a little bit more story about Chandrar, to show us it's not everything about war.
reji
2021-05-12 22:06:55 +0000 UTCSo the power of historical projection bringing out an person out of history to help you the more you know of the person/object the more power the projection has to the original. Another author used something similar to there protagonist.
Technobread
2021-05-12 18:20:32 +0000 UTCMostly the default slave trade. Probably because we seem to be just seeing the worst of pretty much every country as plot focus -- so there could be better bits ... maybe because it feels like 90% (aside from Khelt & Pomle) are megalomaniacs happily isolated by the seas? :) Agreed overall they are probably as bad/good as the others -- but Chandrar just seems more obvious about it. (In the current plot arc). The whole thing with the Navarre's Fallen & mind-bending Slave master probably bouncing off a personal moral twitch point or something. ;)
Beth Rasmussen
2021-05-12 17:42:42 +0000 UTCWhy so? Looks like same as Earth for me. Chandrar us Persia and around - sand, harsh environment, and warrior culture, strong unity, and a lot of internal struggle because there is not enough resources. Terrandria is Europe - colonize everything, think of themselves too much, and everything else as uncultured peasants. Izril is USA - ignore "masters"=Terrandria, xenophobic behaviour, exterminate natives with prejudice Baleros - jungles. Sounds as good job for me
reji
2021-05-12 16:42:00 +0000 UTCI kinda really hate that continent. >< .... I may exclude Pomle from the rest but yikes .... really hate that continent.
Beth Rasmussen
2021-05-12 16:04:52 +0000 UTCAfter reading this I am so ready for a Byres family reunion! Sire knightly knight A, Sire knightly knight B and Yvlon the one armed rage machine. It’s going to be beautiful :,)
2021-05-12 13:20:09 +0000 UTCKsmvr part amazing, Yvlone part .... meeeh somehow feels to much cliche... but okay let’s see.
Antrochin
2021-05-12 07:25:04 +0000 UTCLol the Skyrim reference 😂
Chargcake
2021-05-12 06:53:08 +0000 UTCPoor ksmvr.....just keeps getting kicked about. Probably heroic skirmisher.
matt emmons
2021-05-12 04:10:54 +0000 UTCSystem tried to grant Ksmvr class Hero?
reji
2021-05-12 03:53:54 +0000 UTCI used to be an adventurer like you, but I took a golem to the face. I did not expect a Skyrim reference, but here we are.
Alvin Baena
2021-05-12 01:41:55 +0000 UTCI took the day after second vaccine dose off to recover. Only problem is turns out the day I got the second dose is the same day my daughter brought some sickness home from daycare. So I got the fun “vaccine plus illness plus 2 hours of sleep” combo.
Joe Smith
2021-05-11 23:18:27 +0000 UTC