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8.20

Tired after such big writing. But another chapter! (24,800 Words)


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https://wanderinginn.com/2021/05/02/8-20/

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Very nice -- I was also thankfully less rage filled when you revealed where they landed. Left me with some hope. ;)

Beth Rasmussen

This was fun, thanks

Ivandro José

i feel like the continual references to how "alone and lost" the horns are is misplaced. It's like Pirate is talking directly to me, the reader, saying," you liked the horns together, well tune in to the individual spin-offs where something amazing will happen. wink wink." I was reminded of the editor saying not to start writing from waking up but rather in the middle of some action, it was very much a version of that cause it feels like they got isekai'd. honestly i don't know better, but was that ment to be an epilogue or something cause that's the only place i'm familiar with an author using that particular voice. The scenes with the horn as leads are great tho! I'm just taking issue with what i feel is weird narration.

Andre Washington

I am just so impressed with your writing. I've read hundreds of fantasy novels and listened to hundreds more and your world and story are top tier.

Really enjoyed the chapter. Treat yourself well

Patterson

I actually laughed out loud many many times with this chapter! A fun read.

Frozen

Another great chapter.

I am ready for a happy chapter

One day Purple Smiles will return. Until then, these chapters shall suffice.

Mac

Thanks for the great chapter!

Ah. Not an Erin chapter. Still great though!

Bejan Bosc

There is only one proper way to end a prayer for Erin: THE INNKEEPER PROTECTS!

war doggle

5.50 am on a Sunday here. Just woke up for a glass of water. One look on the phone to know the time. Aaand I'm not sleeping the next hour or so. Thanks for that ;)

For some reason I thought we where not going to have chapter tonight

Caanbo

Thanks for the chapter!

Kevin M


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