8.20
Added 2021-05-02 03:49:31 +0000 UTCTired after such big writing. But another chapter! (24,800 Words)
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Comments
Very nice -- I was also thankfully less rage filled when you revealed where they landed. Left me with some hope. ;)
Beth Rasmussen
2021-05-11 17:24:43 +0000 UTCThis was fun, thanks
Ivandro José
2021-05-05 00:14:59 +0000 UTCi feel like the continual references to how "alone and lost" the horns are is misplaced. It's like Pirate is talking directly to me, the reader, saying," you liked the horns together, well tune in to the individual spin-offs where something amazing will happen. wink wink." I was reminded of the editor saying not to start writing from waking up but rather in the middle of some action, it was very much a version of that cause it feels like they got isekai'd. honestly i don't know better, but was that ment to be an epilogue or something cause that's the only place i'm familiar with an author using that particular voice. The scenes with the horn as leads are great tho! I'm just taking issue with what i feel is weird narration.
Andre Washington
2021-05-04 18:56:12 +0000 UTCI am just so impressed with your writing. I've read hundreds of fantasy novels and listened to hundreds more and your world and story are top tier.
2021-05-03 16:04:55 +0000 UTCReally enjoyed the chapter. Treat yourself well
Patterson
2021-05-03 10:41:05 +0000 UTCI actually laughed out loud many many times with this chapter! A fun read.
Frozen
2021-05-03 08:25:02 +0000 UTCAnother great chapter.
2021-05-02 17:58:26 +0000 UTCI am ready for a happy chapter
2021-05-02 14:14:00 +0000 UTCOne day Purple Smiles will return. Until then, these chapters shall suffice.
Mac
2021-05-02 13:15:22 +0000 UTCThanks for the great chapter!
2021-05-02 12:06:14 +0000 UTCAh. Not an Erin chapter. Still great though!
Bejan Bosc
2021-05-02 09:56:06 +0000 UTCThere is only one proper way to end a prayer for Erin: THE INNKEEPER PROTECTS!
war doggle
2021-05-02 09:37:37 +0000 UTC5.50 am on a Sunday here. Just woke up for a glass of water. One look on the phone to know the time. Aaand I'm not sleeping the next hour or so. Thanks for that ;)
2021-05-02 03:52:29 +0000 UTCFor some reason I thought we where not going to have chapter tonight
Caanbo
2021-05-02 03:51:34 +0000 UTCThanks for the chapter!
Kevin M
2021-05-02 03:50:28 +0000 UTC