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8.13 F

Shorter chapters! Revisions! Rest! All good things? (20,200 Words)


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Liked the nod to /r/menwritingwomen.

Ingo Wiarda

This chapter had me smiling like crazy today at a customer appointment when I managed to ninja read most of it on my phone, I had users come by and tell me that I really must love my work to be so happy and giggling while doing it. I just smiled at them and said some days are great!

CromCruach

I really hope Fierre keeps her promise. That she doesn't forget herself and do something we will all regret.

Alvin Baena

Yay! But no spoilers!

John Koor

Welp after this chapter that theory is pretty much not the case

Christian Matthew

Its nice to visit with Fierre, even if she isn't my favorite character. I was quite pleased at the end of the chapter - she had two paths she could go down, glad she chose the better one :) Thanks for the chapter!!

ElisebethT

Yep, he did say his strongest gaurdian still stood there and its memory is what kept him half alive. It may be weakened but it wont go down without a fight

Ford-Thomas Frank Loveland

Is the village of the dead the resting place of the Putrid One? Might actually be assailable now that he's proper dead.

Rheklr

Hmm. A Fierre chapter was my least desired option in the last survey. I have full faith in Pirate's ability to make it interesting once I get into it, but I won't end up having the usual fervor to start reading as I do with other chapters. The fact that Pirate chose to make this chapter even though it wasn't a winner does imply it's more important to the main story and not just fluff, so there is that. I used to like the Fierre stuff, but the Fierre dark turn amidst all of the other stuff just makes me see it as a story line that won't have much in the usual way of WI fun and happiness. I think it will be a downward spiral with the author pushing her to more and more depravity until allies turn on her and she hits rock bottom. Basically a Toren-style arc. Or Ryoka angst/self-hate arc.

John Koor

Lol, even your shorter chapters are over 20k

Ford-Thomas Frank Loveland


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