8.01

I am really loving Chapter 8 so far.

Roseletemps

Well at least with Erin MIA the rest of the cast has a solid kick to advance their own plot and development, even if it is largely centered around her somehow.

DThornz

Erin's not dead, don't say it. You can't give up on her that easily can you? Can you even call yourself her friend?

afruitlesshippo

Want more of Kevin .2

Caanbo

I like the motivation everyone else is getting to get off their butts though. And the *spoilers, redacted* with the Antinium has me hype. :p

Xrn plays rough with her favorite toys.

Roseletemps

Keep up the good work Pirate. Thx for thw chapter.

Joel Nikula

Thank you!

Andrew

Thanks for the chapter, pirate.

Yair Sarig

I'm interested in the indirect actions that people are going to start taking to screw with Hectval. I mean even if it is just Saliss saying he won't sell to anyone who sends them money could hamstring their ability to put up a prolonged defense. Add in some of the top smiths of Pallass, at least 5 gold rank teams, Selys, Selys's grandmother, and Ilvriss adds up to whole lot of money, influence, and connections. The Brotherhood of Serendipitous Meetings are not a battlefield force but the amount of chaos high level thieves and thugs could bring down on supply lines and secret plans has to be nuts.

war doggle

Isn’t that a rather myopic interpretation of the chapter?

I begin to hate her. She don't even value the life of the things she like. She has traitorous tendency against her Qweens. She think herself better than them but she is the same evil. She is like Klblch. You tend to think he was a nice guy, untill you understand he don't care the less of you and see you as a tool.

Julien Fellegara

To be fair everything outside of Liscor was great. It is just horrible sadness of Liscor came first an colored my reading of the rest of the chapter. If the chapter had just been a dragon yelling at her spy/babysitter, the antinium Queens inability to act, and Magnolia showing up the drakes then I'd be happy with the chapter.

Alan McBrayer

That's not what I got from the last chapter, what I got was a buildup to try to move along some of the "supporting characters" stories instead of just leaving them as dead ends like a unfinished TV show that just got cancelled with no real ending. I still want to know what happened to all the other main chars that are currently out of the main frame (like Relc & Klbkch), they don't need full chapters but it would be great to add a few lines here and there just to keep their parts of the story alive.

CromCruach

Agreed. 8.00 gave me a bit of hope that this arc would be about the crazy adventures of the people trying to find a cure for Erin. Nope, it's about how the world isn't worth living without Erin and everyone is really really depressed. This isn't the story I signed up for. I can't even read old chapters anymore without being depressed.

Alan McBrayer

Thank you for the chapter pirate, great as always. So much preparation being laid out here, I am excited for the possibilities!

Alvin Baena

Speaking of names, Cirediel Anvi’dualln Olicuemerdn. X(

Joshua Flowers

ROFL, the mathematics and number themed naming reminds of Ralt's green mantid caste. Wonder if any Antinium will start developing a taste for higher maths formulas and physics.

Joshua Flowers

I thought she was going to kill the only female. I was like no more deaths

Caanbo

Not having you around for two weeks was torture! I hope you could relax a bit, thank you for all the chapters!! <3

Celsica

Mad scientist Xrn might be my new favorite.

Raian

Legit I’m so down on this story with her frozen that I’m waiting days before reading releases. I almost dread them, hesitating to click the link and be once more depressed shes still out.

Docnox

Honestly, I hope Erin has some kind of development sooner than later. We know she'll wake somehow.

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