7.51
Added 2020-10-11 05:16:47 +0000 UTCToday's chapter's password has nothing to do with the actual chapter. I'm just really hungry, okay? I get to eat after I post this! Also, longer chapters! Yay? (27,500 Words)
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Comments
I agree. The last... Maybe 5 chapters seem all rushed. The one with the pirates attacking the king of destruction very notably so. Also most of them seem like a tale of 'and then this happened, and meanwhile over here...' but I really enjoy character buildup even if it takes longer. I wish pirate wasn't in such a rush lately. There is also repetitiveness, but that was always an issue I guess. Also grammar and spelling seem to have suffered. As much as I look forward to every chapter I would actually enjoy a well written one once a week more than the rushed ones.
Lissa
2020-10-14 05:38:59 +0000 UTCKinda felt like rushing a Liam redemption arc by shoving him and Krshia into a relationship and giving him a bunch of noble causes without really having him deal with the crap he has pulled or the fact that his position of power is due to the former council being cheats. Him being suddenly competent and caring feels more like a retcon than the progressive writing the story normally has. Kinda the opposite of the Montressa stuff.
Donato Hunter
2020-10-14 04:59:34 +0000 UTCOr earlier and earlier in the morning
Joel Nikula
2020-10-14 04:55:16 +0000 UTC:(. Seems like it gets later and later at night before chapters come out.
Kevin Choi
2020-10-14 04:39:45 +0000 UTCWould have rather had a nice build up to this one. Like them getting drinks together a couple times or something.... Feel like with all the new areas we are getting, the main cast seems to be losing detail.
Kevin Choi
2020-10-14 01:11:02 +0000 UTCI actually have been looking the Lism-Krshia dynamic lately but I never would've guessed it was intimate. Really enjoyed them this chapter.
taukid
2020-10-12 02:31:58 +0000 UTClike it basically turns miss house of El into her younger self that only regains her memories and levels like the last day before the potion wears off and she needs to take another one. almost like a second personality
Ruyxi Sylpheyes
2020-10-12 01:23:46 +0000 UTChmm, side effects of youth include loss of memories and levels as potion of youth potion reverses time for drinker maybe?
Ruyxi Sylpheyes
2020-10-12 01:22:06 +0000 UTCI feel like a kid that was taken into the ice cream shop only to be carried over to the candy store. The Erin tease is for real and the drama increases. Cannot wait for Tuesday.
Parker Groseclose
2020-10-11 18:22:04 +0000 UTCCan anyone say Trojan horse?
NinjaChicken
2020-10-11 15:52:30 +0000 UTCThank you!
Andrew
2020-10-11 15:09:17 +0000 UTCGreat job Pirate nice chapter once again
Joel Nikula
2020-10-11 12:38:44 +0000 UTCcause its nokha wearing bearclaw skin
Ram nevet
2020-10-11 11:54:06 +0000 UTCWriter needs food, badly!
FuzzyTiger
2020-10-11 11:45:04 +0000 UTC'Bearclaw'
Joshua
2020-10-11 10:26:45 +0000 UTCBearclaw alias Nokha huh
Arroww
2020-10-11 09:51:03 +0000 UTCNice chapter. Bearclaw why is she not dead yet
Caanbo
2020-10-11 08:58:48 +0000 UTCExcellent chapter. Not sure I can sleep.
matt emmons
2020-10-11 08:12:15 +0000 UTCGreat chapter! Now I can finally go to sleep.
Raian
2020-10-11 07:45:05 +0000 UTCThank you for the chapter!
Tom Prouty
2020-10-11 06:04:14 +0000 UTC
