Interlude - Foliana

I wouldn’t even mind if you got to the end, and they were blatantly revealed, a al “did you catch these two links?” With the two links spelled out. But for myself, I don’t enjoy having to take my phone, convert it to reader mode, and re-scroll for something that *literally doesn’t appear* on the phone browser. On a PC you could do a quick mouse hover and it wouldn’t be too bad, but on a phone you can’t easily find “hidden” clickable links. And in the prior chapter like this I had to cut and paste the chapter into my note board to try to find the text. When I highlighted it in Safari, *it remained invisible even while highlighted.*

Donald Smith

Given Pirate referred to them directly in the comments I see nothing hidden about it at all. Just a new way of writing a story - made me read the chapter twice with two different views. A pity it cannot be shown the same way in book form. :-)

KDP

Hm I actually really liked how yo did this chapter. I don't believe that the secret links were there to be sneaky on your part, since everyone who finds it can just reveal them to others. Rather I think you included them because they reveal the hidden agenda, they tell a completely different story than that which comprises the majority of the chapter.

Ground Control

Ugghhhh you are the worst in the absolutely best way. I love the hidden stuff, going back and banging my head against the wall. Her skills are wicked. The best part is. She's so everywhere with her actions that first glance you can't tell if she's doing something just cause she wants or a more specific purpose.

Kittora

I get that you’re being creative with the rogue, and I enjoyed the content you put in there, but I come here to relax, not to try to ferret out buried content. If others really like it, then whatever, I guess. But I work 12 hour days, and I come here to *enjoy* and *read*. Not to wonder if I’ve had the wool pulled over my eyes. I can honestly say this (and last time) is the only time I’ve felt sour about reading your work.

Donald Smith

Can I request a poll specifically on whether people like the hidden content?

Donald Smith

Try clicking around with your cursor/finger anytime Foliana eats anything important; you’ll find them. (Also as a tip if you’re on a phone the “text only” versions of pages usually make Foliana shenanigans much more visible).

OtherPlayers

Thanks!

Jennifer

dont forget to vote for the wanderin inn. http://topwebfiction.com/vote.php?for=the-wandering-inn

Bookman

Please excuse me in advance.... Holy fucking shit Foliana is so cool. that is all.

Case

What were they?

Thank you!

Andrew

I only found 2 secrets. I think that is all of them. Unless the secrets had secrets ...

Lionel

A great chapter! One with definitely no secrets in it for sure! I guess it says something about how consistent you are that for a while I thought that the joke for this chapter was that you weren’t going to post a link to it.

OtherPlayers