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6.57

This chapter was hard work! Harder than most, but is this chapter better than most? You decide! (19,000 Words)


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It's going to be interesting

Kittora

And that's not even taking into account how Azkerash will react to the apprentice being taken to winstram. Even if he doesn't care about pisces he can't allow winstram to know about his survival

Alan McBrayer

Honestly their stated decision to stay for a few days rather than flee really shows their arrogance. The adventurers are gonna wake up in a few hours and it won't take much of an intuitive leap that the winstram mages are also after the door. Combine that with the watch captains reaction, the antinium reaction to ksmv being kidnapped, grimalkin coming to train Ceria, and the half seekers staying at the inn and these mages will be lucky to survive the night.

Alan McBrayer

True, by association, the moment the Inn started paying taxes it is "part" of Liscor and thus the same extends to the door. I also agree that the Walled cities will not allow the door to leave Liscor if they get wind of this. In fact, I hope that Zevara is the one unfold what is happening under Liscor's watch when the centaur goes to see her: her fury should be a sight to behold!

Luca

I don't think it really matters if it's strategic. It's liscors inn now and liscors door. Drake's don't like anyone taking their stuff.

Kittora

She also has the walled cities who don't want the door taken I'm sure

Kittora

I wonder how Montressa and her goons plan on taking the door. If they have the gonads to flat out announce it to Erin's face, someone get some popcorn as the mages are in for a much deserved beat down [rubs hands with malicious glee] Also, now that the Inn is officially part of Liscor, would the door be viewed as a strategic asset for the city? If so it will make Zevara even less inclined to tolerate these fools from Wistram and their actions

Luca

Illphres's spellbook was tossed by Charles de Trevalier into the sea after he intercepted its delivery to Ceria (Wistram Days, Pt 7)

Luca

Ahhhh. That's right, man that was a a while ago wasn't it.

Kittora

L is the codename Laken used in his and Ryokas convo with Blackmage so they are probably looking for him

B'eliar An'Zoth Lord of Daze

Is "L" Lyonette? Also Erin is going to be pisssssssssed. If you think that a chance to go home is enough for her to turn her back on her friends. Once she finds out what they did to the horns and mind blanking selys and planning to steal her door. Erin is chaos. Can't wait to see what kind she makes.

Kittora

Really good chapter. Rage inducing of course, but the fact that it elicits those kind of emotions is proof of the story's quality. Such chapters are also necessary to major upheaval as well. A few notes: --I kind of want Ceria to be taken, because it'll be a chance for her to get her master's spellbook, which seems important for her breaking through to Gold and beyond. --I hope we get to see Cognita's reaction to people she declared graduates being called exiles. I doubt she'd help them directly, but she'll expect them to be treated as graduates. --I wonder if Erin can detect the Horns at some level due to advanced cooking? She's shown that she has some ability to detect the appetites of those within her inn. --The bit with the election plays in really nicely here because Erin is now a taxed citizen. They can't just take her and sweep her under the rug without causing an incident with Zevara--she might overlook the adventurers being assaulted based on how the law reads, but there's no way she can let a citizen of Liscor just be kidnapped. That said, I don't think they'll get any leeway with Selys--getting Mind Blanked seems like something that will invite repercussions from Tekshia if no one else. --All we need now if the party hunting for Lyonette to show up and we'll have a real brawl on our hands, lol.

Hursha

God so good. I read this whole chapter hopping around me room in excitement.

Will Murray

That is a losing fight if I ever saw one.

ZombieNo53

How can you end it like that, how am I suppose to sleep tonight...or tommarw. Why isn't it Tuesday yet😭

Kosnik4

AHHHHHH I can't wait for teusday!

Hairface

Soooo angerfying.... come Tuesday!

Rukshan

Now I am angry and with no way to vent until Tuesday. UGH! You win this round Aba.

Parker Groseclose

They do have an [Illusionist] with them. I imagine they have been busy concealing their activities.

Randomdigits

aaaaargh the clifhanger........... Any why did the watch not intervene. I mean the attack in the bar is blockable but on the open street? The magic should have been noticed by someone. 5 complet strangers in liscord suddenly vanishing in the open street together with two very famous people of the city? People should have noticed and at least called a the guard to investigate. The rest is fine but this just seems so strange to me.

Bookman

The cliff! Bad Aba!! Naughty pirate!

Emmanuel Martinez

The wait for Tuesday and next chapter is going to be hard...!

KDP

Wow this is just cruel. Wistream really is a pile of steaming....

Seadrake


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