6.46 E
Added 2019-09-21 16:42:30 +0000 UTCAnd here we are. (15,200 Words)
mother'sLove
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Comments
Holy crap that ending. Phenominal.
2019-09-22 11:20:32 +0000 UTCUmm. Spoilers?
John Koor
2019-09-22 08:06:43 +0000 UTCGood arc!
KDP
2019-09-22 08:03:17 +0000 UTCSpoiler alert: I loved the twist but writing at the end felt forced. Like Ryoka who seemed to have struggled to even move the wind this arc now suddenly changed the path of a fire twister? Wish we could have spent more time on her overcoming her struggle with the wind.
TinkTank
2019-09-22 04:53:59 +0000 UTCHmmm. I am not a fan of the ending of this chapter.
Hursha
2019-09-21 23:47:23 +0000 UTCI was always on the fence for this Arc but that ending just sold the entire Arc for me. Good Work keep it up!
Screwball
2019-09-21 18:09:11 +0000 UTCDamn... that was well done. Have no doubt
Rukshan
2019-09-21 18:05:58 +0000 UTCloved it. Didn't see the twists coming.
2019-09-21 17:45:25 +0000 UTCThe best and the worst part of your writting is just how damn good you are at characterisation, and how little plot armor you put in.
Seadrake
2019-09-21 17:40:16 +0000 UTC
