5.43
Added 2018-12-04 10:18:03 +0000 UTCI have no idea what the chapter is about. I wrote this message before the chapter so I could publish it right away. (19,800 Words)
underEarth
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Comments
I got used to the many stories, and perspectives so I started thinking anytime is a time for an interlude or a different perspective. After all there are so many characters we follow throughout this story. Too long in one is a long break for us in another. I have no clue how it should be approached, I just know I enjoy reading your story no matter the turn.
Myeong Lim
2018-12-05 14:36:17 +0000 UTCOnly thing that stood out to me was Nokha smelling the ice dagger, even though it's just water, but none of them smelling grass even though it's not found in the dungeon.
Rugger
2018-12-05 01:18:31 +0000 UTCYour chapters are everything I look forward to. Thank you for your efforts.
Gaspar Diaz
2018-12-04 14:44:59 +0000 UTCfor the love of all that levels please just finish this arc before going off on an intermission, its not something good for people to be left on a cliffhanger for too long
2018-12-04 12:19:55 +0000 UTCI love these longform style chapters, they are incredibly immersive. Seems like your skill leveled up for sure.
derp
2018-12-04 11:52:47 +0000 UTCSorry about that. Try again now.
pirateaba
2018-12-04 10:22:05 +0000 UTCLink doesn't seem to work
Svarog
2018-12-04 10:21:20 +0000 UTC
