3.25
Added 2017-10-21 14:06:31 +0000 UTCYou know what I hate more than anything else in the morning? Allergies. Oh, and having to post the latest chapter. I love your reactions, though. (10,500 Words)
cellarDoor
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Shouldn't it be 3.35?
2017-10-22 21:40:13 +0000 UTCoups, seems I've had too much to drink yesterday. I'm sorry.
2017-10-22 14:55:38 +0000 UTC'Soda'
2017-10-21 23:59:13 +0000 UTCYou are an awesome writer, but your writing suggests that you have a terrible (u.s.) diet ('burgers'). ;-}
2017-10-21 23:58:03 +0000 UTCGreat Chapter! Some small corrections (hope I'm not just being picky): "They’d just finished leaning Hamlet," - learning "could probably pray a great knight" - play "The others had objects of course." - :) um.. this one could be slang.. but 'objections' also works "but we get get good horses and" - extra 'get'. "After a while, the she tried to plug" - then " that rode down the trampled slowly road, slowly moving south." Extra 'slowly'? Hah.. thank you! Ended that chapter with a grin on my face. Can't wait to see how Erin ends up using her new magic item!
Ashrothe
2017-10-21 18:36:48 +0000 UTCI love this chapter! Best one yet.
Parker Groseclose
2017-10-21 16:52:07 +0000 UTCA great chapter! Thank you:)
DenverDrew
2017-10-21 15:39:00 +0000 UTC
