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Added 2017-10-03 14:27:10 +0000 UTCAnd thus, we draw the story to a close. (10,500 Words)
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Comments
This is definitely one of the best bits of the series. I teared up pretty bad. With a bit of editing it would be an amazing short-story in it's own right.
Sean Coker
2017-10-07 05:35:14 +0000 UTCYou mean undead, right?
John Koor
2017-10-05 00:16:38 +0000 UTCYou are using this to teach toren whats empathy and love, aren't ya? Toren is learning why people react in certain ways.
2017-10-04 01:33:59 +0000 UTCHeart wrenching, some people just deserve better and its such a gut punch when it gets snatched away from them.
Paul Millsted
2017-10-03 20:32:46 +0000 UTCThat was heartbreaking. I wanted the girl to live and enjoy reclaiming her humanity. But what happened instead made more sense. That storyline was incredibly powerful and you should be proud of how you weaved all of those intersecting stories together and enriched the depth of this world and its people.
Nicholas Guyett
2017-10-03 19:26:12 +0000 UTCToren is dead to me
AKi1red
2017-10-03 18:13:32 +0000 UTCAn amazing conclusion, you continue to surpass all your previous chapters with ease. I can't wait for Saturday!
Parker Groseclose
2017-10-03 16:27:20 +0000 UTCAnd now im tearing up n u hate u
AKi1red
2017-10-03 15:26:20 +0000 UTC
