3.01 E
Added 2017-08-05 15:05:00 +0000 UTCAnother day, another story. And I'm out of quips. (10,000 Words)
braillestory
https://wanderinginn.wordpress.com/2017/08/05/3-01-e/
Comments
Awesome chapter, so far I'm super behind the decision to mostly keep the focus on Erin, and Ryoka to a slightly lesser extent, whilst occasionally expanding the world, and fleshing out the other characters. It really adds dimension to the other characters, so we can better get in their heads whilst also not losing focus. I think that is quite easy to do with so many characters and in such a massive world. That being said, I'm really looking forward to seeing the [Emperor] and the [Doctor] again. Also looking forward to see how Ryoka fares with the magic book!
2017-08-06 12:44:15 +0000 UTCThat was very poignant ... do I mean poignant? or is that only for sadness? anyway you brought the feels! 'I'm a Paladin' I hope to see a Durene POV one day, that would be wonderful.
Paul Millsted
2017-08-05 23:28:06 +0000 UTCBeautiful
AKi1red
2017-08-05 16:00:36 +0000 UTCHi
2017-08-05 15:05:52 +0000 UTCI love this new character
Michael
2017-08-05 15:05:20 +0000 UTC
