NTS sex scene Kana and Sayako in the work
Added 2024-05-02 04:47:27 +0000 UTCI know I'm a shitty writer and wasn't able to do like Warped desires dev or even kashidashi tsuma.
But, this execution, I am 100% sure people will be pissed. Look, I am not playing around. I am dead serious about this. But, I 100% sure, you will be mad. Especially NTS fans. I know I have a problem that will never be satisfied because that is my whole personality. Will never be satisfied. But, this will be 100% end up NTR or maybe, just a cheater series tbh.
Also, I will try to release this month before I close Patreon. So, yeah, I will try to work asap here. Since, I did want to jump away from Patreon.
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"Am I going to do avoidable? Fuck avoidable. I mean sure, I can do it, but... what's the point?" I think a lot of writers have problems with this, especially when a shitty company (Disney, EA, etc.) is behind it and the company doesn't care how the story fares. "If Jack being an asshole against Sanako and Ayako, both of them will listen to Sayako and become more vulnerable." Plus, Jack would also bite himself in the ass. If Ayako and Sanako find out what Sayako is up to, why should the two of them help Jack escape Sayako's control in the possible final?
Sakui
2024-05-03 12:28:45 +0000 UTCThis is why lately, I prefer Hardcore Corruption. Netori even. It just feels so miserable focusing on Jack storyline alone to be completely honest. It feels miserable and pathetic. But yeah, I am going to bulldoze that chapter 2 later. NTRS? Maybe, because I have an idea to do an interface. Showing a stability of Sanako and Ayako inner conflict. If Jack being an asshole against Sanako and Ayako, both of them will listen to Sayako and become more vulnerable. Am I going to do avoidable? Fuck avoidable. I mean sure, I can do it, but... what's the point? Am I doing slow? Not really, cause I am trying to build up until that Monster Lord. I can do r*pe just fine, but I don't want to do it because it will kill the story impact before main story progress. That's why I don't want to do it.
Paradox V
2024-05-03 09:52:36 +0000 UTC"Because the real act of NTR is, the girl need to be fully stolen. Like really stolen." True, Jack would have had to have a romantic relationship with all the Girls party members, but he is only with Kana and Sayako is cheating on all the Girls party members. "She just want Jack away from getting revenge." Agree. It would be bad for Sayako if she found out that Jack is one of the reincarnations that Sayako needs and that he uses the goddess powers in him for revenge against Sayako, once he has learned to control these powers. Because Sayako is supposed to win. To become more susceptible to Sayako's corruption, he may have to be devastated without wanting revenge, which doesn't fit Jack's character. But he could perhaps awaken his goddess power out of control, since Sayako needs to gain the knowledge that Jack is her target after Kana. I'm excited and I'll be surprised by what's to come.
Sakui
2024-05-03 09:08:51 +0000 UTCThis is why I said, not really NTR or even NTS. More to just cheater series at this point. Because the real act of NTR is, the girl need to be fully stolen. Like really stolen. I am not a good writer for it to be depress simulator like thug hero party dev or scars of summers dev(Again, the dev is freaking good at giving illusion of being vanilla, imo, it just ruined vanilla fan due to no sex scene for it imo. Not hating the game, I freaking love scars of summers.). This is why monster lord planning take a really really long time. Because, I want it do this 2 things. Sex and Story at the same time. Give a bit of a hint what might actually happened to Sayako herself. What made her evil in the first place and why she is fixated on getting revenge. Like I said, I didn't change any characters behaviour. More to, Sayako revenge was petty. She is not in character. She just want Jack away from getting revenge.
Paradox V
2024-05-03 07:50:24 +0000 UTC"More like just a cheater series." It feels that way at the moment but maybe it's good for character development, not just for Jack. Kana allows Sayako to steal her because she is extremely naive and very easily manipulated. She wants to be a good girlfriend for Jack and asks Sayako how she can be a better girlfriend for Jack and a short time later, Kana lets Sayako fuck her. Things won't go well forever and Jack finds out in an unpleasant way that Sayako has a dick. All it takes is one stupid random moment and Jack catches her and Sayako having sex, a confrontation ensues and the boyfriend/girlfriend relationship comes to a crashing end. As I understood it correctly, please correct me if I'm wrong. In Chapter 3 the group wants to find out why Sayako (Group POV Sanako and Ayako) is doing this. The group would have to find out in some way what Sayako did besides Sayako's back story. Just as an idea. The anger Jack would have if he caught Kana and Sayako having sex could be the beginning of his downfall. Kana would try to save the relationship somehow but it ends in disaster. The rest of the group shows up and since Jack can now put one and one together, he reveals the information that everyone had an affair with Sayako and all the group members are mad at each other and maybe there will be a fight Jack vs. Alice, Sayako, Kana, Juliette and Yuki and in the end, Sayako Win but all group members are seriously injured from Jack and Jack injured too. After the fight, Jack leaves the group crying, disappointed and angry. Kana has to learn the hard way what a good girlfriend is not but is an advantage for Sayako.
Sakui
2024-05-02 13:40:09 +0000 UTCAh, jesus, this is the problem. I am not sure if this game even NTR or NTS or whatever. This is why I am thinking to merge it long time ago. I mean, pure NTR storyline sure is fun because can avoid Jack being totally pure dumb which a lot of people would hate. Because, a real act of NTR. The lover need to be stolen. Completely! What I meant by doing it like nebel, there is NTS ending. That's what I meant tbh. I want to try building up Jack got into NTR fetish. Because, that's his character!
Paradox V
2024-05-02 11:05:36 +0000 UTCBecause, I want this game to be original rather than pure copy paste of Takeda, NTRman or any artists. I want something real original tbh. Because, I don't feel this game even NTR tbh. More like just a cheater series. This is why I am afraid to say anything. Because for it to be real NTR. The lover needs to be totally stolen. Like really stolen. That's the real NTR. This is why I am thinking to do it like nebel/building our futature. Which again. Not even sure at this point tbh. Because, my view is like NTS is just vanilla NTR to me. Problem is context.
Paradox V
2024-05-02 11:00:31 +0000 UTCGods and goddesses cannot be killed by mortals anyway. Apart from that, even if Sayako is not sealed, the game would end after Chapter 2 with a lot of bad luck. Because everything accelerates and both variants (sealed/unsealed) come to a quick end. NTS brings with it even more problems, just in terms of character development. No matter how much Jack and the others have already been corrupted and Sayako presents herself to them, as soon as she starts trying to kill Jack and Kana or control their bodies, her face will show and the group would have one more reason to defusionize Sanako and Ayako and to free them from Sayako's influence but if they still trust her things are different. NTS would also weaken the Goddess of Destruction and prevent everything from being flattened when Nyxari's powers awaken. I can't imagine that the reincarnation can control the powers at the beginning without having gone out of control first, but NTS might want to do that to prevent that one of the group members is seriously injured. For example: Jack would be a greater threat to Sayako if he controlled Nyxari's powers too quickly and Sayako would have no way of corrupting him in time to get the body.
Sakui
2024-05-02 08:56:10 +0000 UTCHmm, not looking for compliment but yeah. I am not sure, I am just pure perfectionist. Because, I really want to make a good game tbh and just focus on main story itself. What I am trying to control is, plot holes. Because in NTS, sure Sanako and Ayako don't know how evil Sayako is. But, it won't makes sense on why Jack and the others didn't seal her. Well, I mean, she is evil but not that evil. This is why for it to be pure NTS is really tricky. I don't want her sealed because based in the lore, she is unkillable. That's what I did for her tbh. It won't make sense on why Sayako didn't get sealed in a way. Well, that is my whole vision for it.
Paradox V
2024-05-02 08:00:12 +0000 UTCYou're not a shitty writer, you just have your vision, the story and tell it in your own way, even if it has changes. There are certainly plenty of people who like your storytelling and spin theories about what could happen next, but don't forget that it's your story and your game, nothing else. I don't think everyone is angry, just the fringe group of complainers who act as if they were the majority who have forgotten what makes a good game. There is a silent majority who simply enjoy your storytelling and game and are curious to see what happens next. Some are inspired to create a story RPG themselves. I still don't understand how to get VN elements into RPG maker or which VN maker is good for sex games, but I'm sure everything will work out. I'm still trying it out but it's fun.
Sakui
2024-05-02 07:43:04 +0000 UTCHmm, not trying to please everyone tbh. Like I said, to be pure NTS like warped desires, it won't happen. It will 100% ends up being NTR. Just letting people know how NTS should be since I did write it in the game itself. Because, in NTS storyline, Sayako will definitely being sealed imo. Because, otherwise, logically speaking, why Jack would let Sayako be though...? That's why I will focus on NTR storyline later. A pure NTR. Hmm, because that monster lord I am thinking to do a soft reset. But yeah, a lot of people will hate it. So, had to accept that this is futa NTR. Because, for Sayako to do it in front of Jack. Jack have to be weak like the OG game. Which, Sayako doing it in front of Jack. The bunny scene. Still planning on how to bring back Joanna. Because, I literally don't want to do this on a pure whims tbh.
Paradox V
2024-05-02 07:08:32 +0000 UTCYou could make the greatest game ever made for some people and others would still be vehemently against every aspect of it. Dont aim to please- just aim to complete. You will lose and gain community until fans are mostly supportive of what you do. Gatekeeping is actually a good thing... So no new NTR route scenes I see?.. Think the cunnilingus was there before ans nothing past says ntr. So thats where things merge?
D0
2024-05-02 06:30:28 +0000 UTC
