Please a serious poll and suggestion.
Added 2024-04-30 08:43:21 +0000 UTCOk, since I am having a headache. I really wanted to stick with Jack POV. Pure POV of him in chapter 2 later.
Can give a serious suggestion? Because I don't want to do this on a pure whims. Since, I want to stick with my vision with the game. Don't want to scrap it either and rework.
Paradise Island is just a meanwhile thing while I am thinking of something for that monster lord thing. Since, I want to satisfy my lust for Hardcore Corruption. A good time for me to bring Joanna back as well. Since I really do want to stick with the OG game. Which people liked, but I didn't noticed NTS fans hated NTR tbh. Well, my writing ain't netorareish enough anyways.
I am trying to find a good proper formula for me to use.
Either a nukige? Less writing which have a lot of sex scenes.
More dialogues? Which have a lot of nonsense talking but less sex scene.
I did have some talk with some guy. Netori+NTR is really tricky and it killed suspense of the story. Since, I want to focus the story on Jack in chapter 2 only.
I am also thinking to blacken out Jack face. So, people would purely see him as unnecessary character. I see this being done a lot in NTR games lately. I know using a male character feels miserable but.... I don't mind genderbend him tbh. Because there is futa on male and genderbended version of him. Which I added for another ending and continue from there.
I give another option which is the original before I added that.
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"This is why I am thinking to jump away from patreon" It's best to have a site that, in addition to turning off comments, doesn't have a private massage, if it then offers an effective block and ban option for the developer and automatically bans hate bots, the reporting function on Patreon takes time and doesn't do much good. "a lot of people think I am doing the milking stage." I think there are a few but not many, because there are certainly many who understand that it is Early Access and in Early Access it is normal that a lot of testing is carried out, the story is changed and/or optimized or features are canceled, future elements are tried out etc. 1 of 4 currently planned chapters are finished, the first chapters are usually building chapters, if I can call it that, and the focus is on building the game world and Chapter 1 focused on Sayako. From what I read, Jack should get more attention in Chapter 2, but it doesn't have to be Jack's POV. Alice and Yuki's POV would allow to learn more from Jack and Kana when they talk about raising Jack and Kana, Juliette's POV more about the training time with Jack in Cacus Village. Maybe Jack, Kana and Sayako are caught having sex around the middle of Chapter 2 but doesn't intervene but walks away and is lost in thought so that the player can perhaps also get to know the dark side of his backstory, which may have dark omens. The player can make suggestions and inspiration and as long as everyone treats each other peacefully and respectfully, it's fine, but no one (including the developer) has to put up with insults. The decision of what will come into the game or not and how the story will unfold rests with the developer.
Sakui
2024-04-30 11:47:39 +0000 UTCThis is why I am thinking to do like nebel or building our futature tbh. Because I am only focusing on one linear story right now. Because, the game story would go all over the place. I still stick to the power scaling of Sayako and Jack tbh. I give that mysterious pov due to some asked for it. Since, I like mysterious pov myself as well. But, I am trying to find some formula. What take a lot of time out of me is executions and animations. Because, I will be honest, I have been focusing the main story the whole time and think if I can do a proper executions. I really wanted to stick with my vision of Futa NTR for chapter 2. Which I know I know, using Jack is pure miserable because he's a male. Sayako aren't supposed to be petty tbh. She is supposed to be really manipulative. This is why the game goes all over the place. The one that are enjoying the situation is Sanako. Ayako even got corrupted by Sayako. I scrapped NTS storyline because yeah, I literally gave up on it. Like I said, I did want to hold it but, it will end up as NTR tbh. This is why I said, some NTS fans don't like NTR. Which... doesn't make any sense...? While NTR don't like it ended up like building our futature or nebel kind of thing.? I know it would tell a different story, but I am interested in getting Sayako. Also, it would just increase my workload in writing tbh. Just, I am thinking to do Paradise Island in order to bring back Joanna and build a story about Sayako a bit. Foreshadowing I guess. Since, that will be hardcore corruption since I got bored focusing on Jack story alone tbh. That will be Netori kind of thing. Since... Sayako going to cuck someone in that part.
Paradox V
2024-04-30 10:58:07 +0000 UTCOne of the better male pov ntr devs imo are the ones like 雨宿り蛙 or 栗pick(Though 栗pick is also the most extreme and bad end despair rpgmakers easily- of any I have ever played and I have played a lot. So it's polarizing just by having such evil antagonists in a shitty world).. 雨宿り蛙 games let you play with or without heroine POV and that's nice. But that also means you must make a story that makes sense even if you take the heroine pov out. And that's why male pov is easier to start with then inserting scenes for heroine povs. But goooood luck. Maybe nukige is the way to go and just pushing the humiliating-type NTR rather than building a big scheme around it since that seems like what you're struggling with. If you go the nukige route- I think Sayako should just get a lot rougher-sooner.. and be obviously a bad person rather than one capitalizing on a new dick and horny heroines. On that note I really really wish Scars of Summer was an NTR game instead of a BSS game... That's a good example of a game with a ton of potential for NTR but failed because the MC is incompetent and chooses not to propose and get in a relationship at all. Rather than anything being stolen- he just chooses not to act while others do.
D0
2024-04-30 10:23:40 +0000 UTCHmm, not sure, because at this moment, a lot of people think I am doing the milking stage. Which is, I wanted to avoid that. Well, there is some random guy decided to come in and insult. This is why I am thinking to jump away from patreon and do the same like fujino did. But this Paradise Island might be a good time to build some background story a bit for Sayako herself. Why that talk no jutsu won't work. Because, let's be honest. I take all these people psychology and well. Exactly why that won't work. Because, I am basically controlling the story. Rather than story goes all over the place. They are angry when I abandoned NTS. Which is why Sayako the talk no jutsu won't work. It won't work imo. They hated a soft resets. Hate what I did. So, yeah. There's the perfect sense. XD
Paradox V
2024-04-30 09:36:19 +0000 UTC"It got boring tbh" Jack isn't an interesting character at the moment either, so it gets boring quickly, so POV switches could offer some distraction besides Paradise Island. On the one hand, he has the problem that as a male he is not allowed to actively participate in sex with Sayako; it is only as a girl that this happens. Sayako shouldn't find out too early or too late that Jack is one of the reincarnations, I think that's supposed to be a plot twist. Otherwise Sayako takes a step too late or too early and in the meantime, what does he do except run through the counter? nothing! If Jack's goddess identity is revealed from Sayako's POV, it would have a special flavor as she rejoices and laughs and Sanako and Ayako look at her confused as she has almost achieved one of her goals.
Sakui
2024-04-30 09:22:59 +0000 UTCThis is why I played a lot of Takeda game and see how he is doing it. Because, if I do Netori this early. It killed the plan I have made for that monster lord tbh. I am doing Paradise Island at the moment for killing the boredom of me focusing Jack only. It got boring tbh. But yeah, it is just momentary of me to have fun in the meanwhile. It is a good time as well where Sayako would teach Sanako and Ayako some magic. Which, they will use those magic in order to get the girls. Just, yeah. Having some fun in the meanwhile. After all, I did want to bring Joanna back.
Paradox V
2024-04-30 09:03:25 +0000 UTCIn terms of potential and possibilities, to have POV from all 6 party members. It also has the advantage that Jack can do something offscreen that the player shouldn't know yet.
Sakui
2024-04-30 08:57:35 +0000 UTC
