You guys had to replay again..
Added 2023-12-23 12:41:28 +0000 UTCI am still working on Alice Sex Scene and try to make it as long as possible for the sex. There is still some fixes I am doing since it is kind of weird Jack just suddenly know going to balcony all of a sudden. So, I am trying to fix someplace and stuff.
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plotholes and story consistency is what I am having a huge headache about tbh. But currently, I will do Netorare storyline atm and show I am capable going dark. Just I want Sayako concept tbh, that's why NTS is there, XD. Because general rule of NTR, it needs to be dark and heart wrenching
Paradox V
2023-12-23 16:18:00 +0000 UTCNetorare is great- been playing everything in that genre for the drama and scenarios.. It's not going to cause problems(if by problems you mean people being against it)-.. The people here supporting you wouldn't be doing such if they couldn't stand NTR...- If you meant by story consistency and plotholes.. well- that's up to you to fix >_>/!..
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2023-12-23 16:16:47 +0000 UTCThis is chapter 1. After that, there is magical night of Kana and Jack. I give a choice based if Jack going to take Kana virginity or not, XD. Since, for my opinion, I like the antagonist able to take the main girl virginity before the MC does. That's a big win of NTR for me tbh. I am more worried if the game got more complicated in story. That's why I try to think and plan certain things carefully tbh. After the magical night, then, I am trying to plan things carefully. Because I freaking love Netorare, but I have no idea it would cause a lot of problem tbh, XD
Paradox V
2023-12-23 15:29:23 +0000 UTCFun- hope to see some stuff not shown here. Maybe the best for last. Will this scene be the last thing that happens in chapter 1? Or is this technically chapter 2?.. actual penetration at end of chapter 1 seems like good foreshadowing then chapter 2 can be claiming the others... finding a way to get Kana's virginity in a rough and fun way. Fujino used sleeprape and just actual rape.. and magical powers and such.. You have a fantasy story and more heroines to use.. So see if you decide on something similar- even just oneee.. I wonder who you'd like to give the worst treatment to out of the heroines- It feels like Juliette is the hot-blooded one that would turn into a masochist with some rough treatment and enjoy it. So maybe throw her the more extreme variety.. Or Kana- because she's the one who should fight- but that makes it that much darker too.
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2023-12-23 13:57:09 +0000 UTC
