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Added 2023-08-18 01:45:09 +0000 UTCI don't need to buy a freaking PC, lul. Someone advised me in a cheaper way and expert in a pc department. So yeah, I am currently a bit busy in finding that graphic card since my fps drop pretty bad until 20-40 using koi when 5-6 characters are in the scene. Just need to find that RTX 2080TI then I'm all good. I hope.
Although, I won't jump straight to chapter 2 anyway since I owe a lot to SamTheYam for making the current game story is good as well and a nice pacing. He came up with a nice concept for Futa NTR as well! It's a pure Netorare game.
I also came up with mine, just need to get used to RPGM more and finding some nice recipe. What I came up with is a Futa Nettori with fusion theme as well. But what I think it's a nukige type of game since I am really bad at writing and funny english.
Nope, I don't plan to abandon this game since I like Sayako concept and the story currently. Just having a bit of writer block. Netorare sure is hard, lul. Either I make the MC lover don't even love the MC or she is just a bitch, XD.
Still, I won't unpause yet since I am still recovering my burnout and collecting my energi! Also yeah, I am currently hunting that graphic card at the moment.
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Sounds really interesting- it's a somewhat common trope because it is popular and withstood the test of time. NTR fans don't get tired of that gimmick and there's many different ways to do it as well. You should never aim to break tropes- just improve them. Well I hope when this is all complete that you feel you met your goal and vision with so much you wanted to add and that it doesn't become so much that you have to sacrifice so many ideas... Keep at it..
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2023-08-19 02:50:22 +0000 UTCyup, that's what I am planning to do for long communication device that will be crafted by Anna. So there will be the usual NTR trope, even NTS would have one. What I meant by Kana won't be there as in, when Jack wait there or go there again to play around, Jack will be all by himself there while Kana is busy helping Sayako. Quite a lot of thing I have planned tbh
Paradox V
2023-08-18 19:17:42 +0000 UTCKana won't be there?... hmm.. Idk what that means. Unless you plan for an event that takes Kana away for a while- maybe a week or something while the MC does other tasks. This is common- can use video or messages to send from afar or wonder how Kana is doing with the choice to see or not. Usually how the main body of the corruption begins in those games- a summer camp or something. They don't come back exactly the same.. You added a video crystal type- it would be nice to improve upon it and keep it in use.- even if it has to be personally delivered and isn't something that can lorewise- broadcast images from afar.
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2023-08-18 18:30:16 +0000 UTCYup, quite a long way to go tbh. What I planned for the beach is, Kana won't be there anymore later on. There is still a long long way to go and that's why I paused since I fucked up a lot of times and I am playing around with people patience and wasting their money.
Paradox V
2023-08-18 18:11:21 +0000 UTCBy futa nettori you mean your current game? Nah... In the NTR route it's definitely not netori since sayokos pov is mostly hidden and you're not controlling her. It's still an NTR game- but it does lack something important. And that is the importance of the main heroine. As it is now- it feels everyone is equally main- as per scenes. We have the one confession scene but it is very short and light- and the join order of the characters into the heroes party. Other than that- nothing really separates kana from the rest as far as quest dialogue and plot progression- and you can even choose who to take out for the day off(supposedly in the future?)- What is important to keep in mind if you want to fully flesh out an NTR game in the future- is first and foremost- do not split it into multiple routes like this one. Have a focus all the way through without needing to think of how each little thing will affect the other route in the story. Secondly- clearly separate the main heroine from the secondary main heroines- It's fine to have multiple heroines with similar amounts of scenes- but you have to make sure one stands above the rest in how the MC perceives them as their most important person. You can use the other heroines as teasing for the player that eventually ramps up into taking the close heroine more and more. Bonus points if it's a variety of designs and character types with contrasting personalities that don't fit well together in a group- for instance a brave and hardheaded heroine that is always trying to push the more meek character into being less of a coward and more tough-.. If you describe a character and people know who it is without you saying their name directly- you at least have a memorable character whose personality is getting through in text. thirdly- With a main heroine- there needs to be constant scenes of them and the MC bonding- and not necessarily bonding- but using this time to show the MC the subtle effects of the netori characters influence. SUPER BONUS points if the heroine is caught by the MC disheveled/stained/sweaty etc- and frantically tries to hide embarassment- something the MC notices that the heroine is changing- or being more aggressive or being more shy- as well as the netori character getting more bold and wanting to do such closer to the MC both to humiliate the heroine and to feel their superiority over the MC. Kana as it is now- basically only exists as another character. when she talks to the MC- there isn't a sign that she was doing something before the chat- or that she has to do something after. It is too casual- it doesn't feel like boyfriend x girlfriend at all. It's like they're both keeping their distance in a way. The beach scene helped a lot- if at the end kana puts her ears down a bit(metaphorically speaking)- and seems like something is weighing on her mind or she loses her thought process for a bit- this would be a good effect. That the MC feels something is off- at least later. Or that she is preoccupied. Or maybe she almost tells him something but changes the subject. These sort of things. Also sorry for the doublepost.
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2023-08-18 10:34:54 +0000 UTC
