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REJECTED COMIC: It's Cosmo Time Again

Here's something that almost never happens! I drew a whole-ass comic but then decided the next morning that it was too out-of-character for Yay to show up like that, so the whole strip had to be scrapped. Sucks to lose a day's work (esp all the Cosmo poses), but on the bright side, the strip I wrote to replace it is gonna lead in some more interesting directions I think.

REJECTED COMIC: It's Cosmo Time Again

Comments

I know right?’

Daniel Rydberg

Yeah. Come on, Marten. Property is theft. That's why all the people with the most property are all rogues.

Michael Chui

This *is* a lovely strip. If you don't wish to post it for characterization reasons, fair, but all the same? It is nicely done.

Streb

He has a line in other strips...altho not in the 'power outage arc 4573'

Huckleberry

My interpretation of last panel Marten is that he's being ironic.

Mark

How fortuitous of me to join the Patreon just now, so I can see a bit under the hood of Jephs thinking :)

Anders Olesen

Well, I really liked this one. AIs loving dogs (& cats) is cool.

Further Headcanon: Yay actually broke through the 4th wall and invented Jeph to write the commic. Jeph doesn't actually exists.

Dimitar Bounov

Headcannon: Yay did just walk in and start talking to Marten but then realized it was too out of character and reversed time so they wouldn't do it.

Chloe Rosenthal

lol, I really love this one.

Daryl Sawyer

the Cosmo poses though!!

Lucas Werkmeister

Cosmo has her priorities straight. Belly rubs are where it's at.

prettydragoon

Anything with Cosmo isn't rejected material. 😤

I am the captian now

is yay the only A.I. without a line between the neck and the torso?

Dan Curtis

He must have got high off that pizza pie...

Leak

This needs to not be rejected, I love it!

Did Martin get into the edibles?

Matt

In fact, I wonder if they know ALL the AI's at a certain level.

Jim Feldman

strip number was unexpectedly high though.

David Howe

Moar Cosmo.

AcheronYYC

never enuff cosmo & marten

Marty BlackEagle

I dunno, Jeph, you've got to figure out how to work that line about Cosmo into a future panel. From Yay, no doubt.

Elf Sternberg

Two comic strips on one day? I might faint

Krestus

Even though Yay is trying to be more respectful of other people's boundaries, I don't see this strip being problematic in that regard. I mean, Aurelia *DID* invite Yay to come back anytime. This would *TOTALLY* be on-point for Old Yay, without the invitation. And as for hippy Marten.... if Claire's going for full "Anything Clinton can do, I can do better" then depending on how much time passed since they got started, it's entirely possible that he's thoroughly stoned from the second-hand smoke alone. Even if he didn't partake as well.

Barry Callahan

Cuddles are for real

Bagge

Ironically, at this point, Yaaay does know most of the AIs Marten knows.

That Blair Guy

Particularly weird given Yay's brief but intense interaction with Faye via Bubbles.

Mark

He could keep it up his sleeve if, Heaven forbid, he again needs to post an emergency strip.

Mark

dang, cuz I'm loving the premiere of this Yay look

Anna Phylaxis

aww, you have high standards Jeph, I liked it, though I'm not wild about Marten's last lines 'Maaaan''

jimbo

i forgot some characters haven’t met yet. wild! somebody needs to have a house party or something, join some dots

Boots McGoot

This comic will never be rejected from our hearts, Jeph :)

Stephen Wells

In the last panel he sounds stoned, maybe.

Jeffrey Anderson

This one is worth posting.

Scott Gosnell

I just thought Yay was coming by to see Cosmo. Checking on Aurelia didn't even occur to me. Oops.

Dilemma01

Man I love seeing Marten again. He feels like an old friend that you haven't seen for years and when you meet up for coffee or a Van Halen listening session - and you're just chilling like old times as if no time has passed. I should call the friends I haven't seen in years and say hello. Thanks for sharing this, Jeph. Hope the holiday season allows us all to reconnect with dear friends near and far!

Hawkeye

I mean, Yay coming by to check in with Aurelia about the events of 4654 would seem reasonably in character, but maybe not that quickly

Carin Maja Brooks

I like hippy Marten.

Andrew Mitchell

nah - she came to see Cosmo

You clearly need a plot line where this strip fits logically, because (a) it so good it needs to be canon, and (b) MOAR COSMO POSES PLZ!!

Christopher Heiny

RIGHT?!! I love this comic. It is as chill as Marten. And Yay would know that Marten is chill enough to handle her drop in.

Yay is so hot. I can has cuddles and head pats?

Drazi

Maybe a bit improbable, so I understand the rejection, but ALSO extremely cute (both Yay and the comic in general), so I'm thankful for the sharing.

William Cole

I like Martin in this. He's been through drama and tears and laughter and love, and he's chill.

John Fiala

How yay makes friends: shows up, hints at otherworldly/godlike power, shows that they are, in fact, just a big 'Ole cinnamon roll. Not a bad strategy.

Robin

I, for one, believe there needs to be more comics with Cosmo being adorable. Plus, more of Hercules being adorable.

What? This is perfectly in line with Yay, from what I know of them.

Isaac Rivers

He HAS been acting high all evening, really.

KCkittysnores

Not gonna lie. I'm a little sad this is getting rejected. It's SO DAMN CUTE!

Ian Wolfe

I loooooove it. From Jeph’s reject bin to my headcanon.

KCkittysnores

as if he doesn't draw pages ahead of time? Marten just said that he's going ot go hang with cosmo, so that's probably what was happening in this page. this rejected page is from the future.

Absentia

The trim on Yay's clothes matches her eyes. Must be that wardrobe consultant.

Sleepy John

An oddity: this rejected comic bears the number 4658, when the actual comic is number 4655.

Sario

Cosmo lookin’ extra adorable, thanks for sharing.

Sue N

Marten has the best outlook.

Shawn K. Younkin

I wouldn't have thought this was all that out of character

Ash359

this cosmo content is so good. 10/10

Phoebe Goldman

I do like the 80’s punk glam Yay vibes.

Miyaa

Somehow I thought Marten already knew Yay!. I guess I just assume everyone's met everyone else...

Alacrity Fitzhugh

Ok, this solidifies it. How fucking big of a bowl did Martin smoke before dinner?

Valraven

But Marten doesn't know they know, you know?

Bill Silvia

Yay and out of character don’t simultaneously exit.

Matt Grayson

I just have a feeling there's two or three government agents from different agencies sitting in a coffee shop somewhere nearby, comparing notes - and freaking out. "Wait - you mean all of the people we're watching know all of the people YOU'RE watching?" "Yeah, but the weird part is when that one AI shows up and all of our surveillance equipment goes down."

Noise

stupid sexy yay

Thanks for posting it... It may be out of character for Yay to show up like that. But I want more Yay and Marten content now, bonding over Cosmo, Yay enjoy the fact that Marten is never suprised by what they do

Yeah, but they made a point to ask Elliot's permission to do so.

Likeablejerk

Marten or Cosmo?

Sleepy John

Yay might have put ultra-high levels of security on the computer, but Claire defeated them just by trying to rotate the avatar image. Moral: Never underestimate the clueless user.

Sleepy John

YES, THEY DID IT ONCE, BUT THAT WAS A JUMP, NOT A WALK! STILL THOUGH, WHATEVER GETS THEM IN HERE!

Yelling Bird

Yay DOES know the AIs you know, Marten.

Sleepy John

I bet Melon is also there somehow

Ace of Hearts

Thanks for sharing it anyway!

Raven

Huh, I thought this might be one of its newfound outreach attempts to connect with humans. Marten must seem relatively safe, given the location and others around.

Timothy Roller

YAY IS WELCOME TO WALK RIGHT INTO MY PLACE ANYTIME! I MEAN, IF ONE CAN TECHNICALLY 'WALK' INTO A TREE...

Yelling Bird

I think he's just being witty.

Diptych

Thank you for posting this! It's interesting to see... What ifs

Leonardo Taglialegne

Such a good boy.

Vanestus

Pretty neat but even by QC standards that is a bit far, YAY just being there. If she had started a video chat on the PC with like remote access to turn off the livestream and talk, I'd find it more in line.

Slashplane

Out of character, really? When has Yay ever shown up any other way?

Leaflemming

Yay's hair looks really good here. I hope it becomes canon one day.

Diptych

I legit did not notice that this was a rejected comic until after I finished reading it, and it seemed perfectly in place and in character to me for Yay to just show up to give Cosmo pets.

Fire Wraith

Wow I totally forgot Martin hasn't met Yay yet. Yay, I'm sure, knows ALL about Martin. Can't wait to see how they meet in canon.

Ryan X

yay has already expressed their plans to enter Elliot's apartment to play with Hercules at random times, so its not unreasonable to think they would to the same to Aurelia. also, why can't i live in the hot ai universe?

Absentia

"You can't own property, man!" "Well I can, but that's because I'm not a penniless hippy."

Duke

Marten got high before coming downstairs, didn't he?

Grace Kieser

Also, is Marten high?

Michael Boettger

the whole time I was drawing it I was thinking "ooooops I made them hotter"

Jeph Jacques

Nevertheless, I like the idea that Yay would wander into Aurelia's house at random moments. Of course, later that evening: Bubbles: what did you say their name was!!

Michael Boettger

Yay looks even hotter than usual here and I really wanna make out with them

Fart Captor

Marten's face in the first panel is so cute

Skyler

Honestly, although you are the writer, I slightly disagree that it's out of character for yay. Because we know yay cares about Aurelia. So I assume she has a subconscious thread running making sure the security precautions put in place work. And then when the stream turned on without Claire's mom being aware yay might go huh. Possible virus. I should check that out. Yay would probably alert Claire's mom but that doesn't mean marten would be aware yay was coming.

Darth Hypno

THE ABSOLUTE SNOOT

... this is what you reject. Mad lad.

Edward Clayton Andrews

I have faith in Cosmo’s ability to do the little leg thing again. (eeee)

Wednesday

I love it, we need more Cosmo in our lives, lol

Aditya Rameshan

Can't wait to see what Yay! thinks about Marten

Niskara

Seeing a rejected comic is cool. Thanks!

William Hanna

Love cosmo

Melvin Miller


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