Some good talk about the writing process in this one I think!
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For what it's worth, I think the transitions to the out-of-sync reflections was really effective. As you say, your eyeline is not in the right place to spot it on a first watch. Was really visually interesting and took me longer than I'd care to admit to figure out how it was done. Really enjoyed the video, got me thinking in a completely different way about time, so thank you!