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Okay, this is totally an aside.  I have a real life, with a normal name, and bae, and a couple of kids.

One of the kids has a creative writing assignment to tell a story in two pages.  A fictional story.  In two pages.  He thought this was crazy, and I agree it's pretty tight, but he still ought to be able to do it.

But I don't wanna be the kind of dad who can't practice what he preaches, so here it is, a two-page, entirely non-erotic, story.

Comments

Sometimes limitations can bring out the art. Maybe that happened here? There's a certain economy of words required.

Xavier Torch

Every idea for a short story I get has a brutally swift ending. I don't know if that's "The Lady or the Tiger" or what.

Xavier Torch

That’s not easy to pull off in such a short format but you did it well.

Alarick Kane

Raised by wolves simplified:)

david Sanda


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