Emily Lockwood in A Detective Never Dies - A Perilous CYOA (S2.2)
Added 2020-07-04 12:04:47 +0000 UTCThis is a Choose Your Own Adventure where you play as Emily Lockwood. Take Emily on an all new investigation where she tries to find and rescue her mom from the clutches of an evil gang of criminals. There are dozens of different unique ways for her story to end, each ending is totally different and you get to choose where Emily goes and what she does
Emily's mom has been kidnapped! After a series of misadventures Emilys vacation ended with her mom being thrown in the trunk of a car, and Emily falling from a bridge! Barely breathing, in a foreign city, with no-one coming to help her, the odds have never been more against the amateur detective. In a city controlled by the very gang she's trying to investigate, Emily will have to be more cautious than ever before. Will the skills she learnt as a sleuth in a small town be enough to save her mom in this far more dangerous environment? It's time for Emily Lockwood to prove if she really can be a detective once and for all!
(Story attached)
To see 'What Happened Next?' in four endings from this story click here - https://www.dropbox.com/s/g1v6mgxrivwechg/2.%20A%20Detective%20Never%20Dies%20-%20What%20Happened%20Next.pdf?dl=0
Comments
Hey Markus! First of all, I wanted to say thanks for this story, and for sticking to your schedule and getting it out to us. I know they're a lot of work. As for the story, it was definitely one of your best, up there with Deadly Horizons. This one even seemed a bit tighter, and the ending was obviously more satisfying. I agree with others that say that it felt like you didn't really know what to do with Riko in the story, but that's the only minor negative comment I can make. Overall, great job.
Jack Rabbit
2020-07-06 20:09:25 +0000 UTCI loved it. I haven't done all the bad endings. defeating Reo was so satisfying and I loved that we got to play as Lynda. I would've liked it if we got to see some more Riko bad endings. But I did love that she helps Emily and I hope that she returns. One thing though was this story shorter? So will the next one be Emily solving her old mysteries again? I'm excited ^^
spyrocyndersam13
2020-07-05 04:15:45 +0000 UTC
