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more bray, eaiser to find links, and occational other stuff/fetish

VIsix6

Everybody here likes Bray, and for good reason. She’s pretty much the perfect package! Don’t be afraid of overusing her; I doubt anybody would complain. While at least one person here says don’t stray into “what if’s” often enough I think it’s fine. It lets us get the Bray sexiness we came here for, but also helps extend the story. I think the “hot Pokégirl that wants to make it as a trainer” idea has some serious meat to it, and you could do a lot with that story line. Gardei ended pretty fast in comparison. Maybe have something with the Hatterene that looks like Serena? I really like that design!

I think I will put the folders of the previous months in a post and I will inform you by means of a message about the month that passes (since some pages filter the content)

Lucyfercomic

As always I love your work and I’m a fan of how you started, but I do prefer seeing a payoff after so long! I know my answer was very long but thank you for reading it.

Aaron Jackson

thanks, then im going to work better in next part with a canon sex part

Lucyfercomic

Overall, I like your work, but I can think of a few things. -It's really hard to locate your monthly folder links. IMO, you should do at least one post a month where you provide these links to us. -I really enjoy your comics, and think you should do more of them. Specifically, I refer to Braxien. -I'd like to see the occasional 'fetish' come up in your hard. For me, that would be some varieties of bondage, but that may just be me.

Chandra Argentis

So a few things I want to get out since you are asking for feedback. Firstly, don't apologize for a lack of/slowdown of artwork. You were sick, and as I am finding out more and more via my writing (and people who are a fan of what I write) it's important to take care of myself first before stressing about making more stuff for people to enjoy. Secondly... I feel like the scripting of the Bray comic may need some work/a lookover by an English speaker (or future comics at least). It's not that I can't understand them, but there's some worded phrases that feel disjointed when being read together. It's not terrible, but it's just a thought! I think the story so far has been interesting, if not a rollercoaster. Bray herself has been really cute, I like the trainer himself, but why not try to differentiate the OCs a bit more between how he and the doctor/professor OC looks? If you just replace the outfit they're wearing, they look identical. Don't be afraid to change up something basic like haircolor or style, but I'm personally not big on the hentai 'covered eyes' OC look. It doesn't detract from the experience, so don't feel discouraged. I would like to see some consistency in whether or not we get scenes with her in lewd moments: going into more 'what if' moments with her are nice but may start to feel like cop-outs the more of them are made. We already had a 'what if' Hypno x Bray sex scene, and adding another one in a 'what if' scene with Bray feels a little crowded. The comic is about her right, so I hope the finale with her is going to be lewd, messy, and full of creampies. I don't mind the extra artwork where she's put into H situations, but I prefer seeing them occur in the actual canon: the idea that we would see her getting fucked in the comic proper is what I think attracted people the most. I know it's what I wanna see, personally. Tl;dr = Don't rely too much on the 'what if' scenes to have Bray actually get fucked. The majority of the audience are there to see her get the dick in the main comic, not the side ones.

Aaron Jackson

In my opinion, I feel like you are doing great with the art

Fireson

Just don't hurt yourself XD

The Cacti

I love catgirls, but bray have special place in my heart.

Personally, I'm in love with Bray. I'm ok with other pokemon getting some attention in your style, but Bray stands at the top for me.

SuperBro.BrawlerKart

More Bray :)

Craig Watts

Would be nice if Dr. Voir ever came back

Snaf

Certainly try not to hurt yourself, art is good but if you need a break you need a break. Only big suggestion I have that wouldn't just be art requests is perhaps having a pinned post with a link to your backlog of work to make it easier for people to look into

Alchemical Scientist

Take the time you need. The only thing worse than waiting long for new uploads would be rushed uploads. As far as preferences go, I'd love to see more Gardevoirs and Non-Pokemon stuff. Love Bray as much as the next guy, but it would be great to see more Monster Musume characters for example- the last Polt pic is one of my favourites :D Either way love the content :)

Edim108

Take your time theres no rush

Sir g

I like all your stuff. I think a good amount of content is coming out. My suggestions are getting someone to help with the English on the comic. I understand it's not your first language and it's okay to ask for help. Secondly I'd like a way to easily look through all your stuff on say a Google drive.

I think you're doing fine, take the time that you need.

manershark 1

more of lana's mom and lusamine

Zalothgq

Circi yes

Lucyfercomic

I'd like to see more Clare and Circi.

Kyogre's Hideout

I like Bray and your Gardevoir short comics too, myself. I'll definitely vote for more of both.

Dark Star

Mystical ELf!

Anjuju

Hey hey, Nice to hear Beter Safe then Sorry, keep that Health Up I'd say I'm Easily Satisfied, Love where the Arts at, Style 'n all I'm a Lover of Gardevoir Primarily Monster Girls > Furry, Personally More on the Psy/Fairy/Grass/Ghost types, then say Eeveelution-line and the more Mammalian Likes but that's my personal taste but like For Example: Bray, Her lvl of Anthro leans High in Humanoid and low on Fur Texture/Elements Tho its Usually the Facial Features/Expressions that are a Deciding point And in your Style Hit the Mark often So I'm Enjoying it for Sure Donno what else to say, Keep up the Good Work

Anjuju

I love everytime that you make a drawing of bray and I feel like is the main character, as you still making pictures of her I will be happy to support you, I enjoy a lot your work :)

My only qualm is that the fox girl really should have a tail. Currently she just looks like a human with a animal head.

coyotepack

A poll for what to draw next then remove the winners in the next one to help cycle those who are popular and some who need more love.

Everstone

The only thing I can currently think of is that you should consider drawing a lot of Yugioh ladies. Like you could start by posting a voting poll on which Yugioh lady you should draw first? 4 choices > (1 - Silent Magician LV8) (2 - Injection Fairy Lily) (3 - Harpie Lady) (4 - Tour Guide from the Underworld) Just a thought... (Also I wouldn’t put Dark Magician Girl on the poll because then it would be a one sided poll since everyone knows and loves her.)

MrResistance

I'm liking Bray, I'd like to see more of her as the main focus

D

I feel like the flow of content has been smooth! I feel, as far as characters go, you could do a poll and see if people would like to see more of the same characters, or different characters, maybe start a new comic etc.

Idal

To be honest, I really enjoy the gardevoir and Bray. I'm still relatively new, and haven't experienced the others much yet, but I'm open to new stuff!

HonkingSpider