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Added 2025-02-25 22:10:02 +0000 UTCI'm currently finishing the rewrite of Foreign Ch. 02. It's not a complete overhaul but I smoothed out the story a bit more. I'm considering just doing a soft reboot since I'm not very satisfied with how the plot is going. I feel locked down (No pun intended) with the whole COVID thing. Things feel a bit dull when it only take place in the small apartment. So I'll need time to tinker a bit. For now, I'm making Chapter 3 available for everyone. Sorry for the delay and I appreciate your support!
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Yeah I donโt disagree
Samshady
2025-02-26 03:05:43 +0000 UTCThe Covid thing was a huge part of the initial appeal. It forced them to interact constantly. Itโs also a really good reason for her to stay in the country for an extended period of time. Itโs a good plot device! If you simply want them to go outside every once in a while then justโฆ do it. Itโs not like itโs in the air, they can venture beyond the confines of the room easily. If the story feels stagnant try pushing the plot forward with a game changing development. There have been plenty of ideas suggested in the general and foreign chat threads.
Me
2025-02-25 22:16:32 +0000 UTC
